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Vote-Black Siinz
Exp: InSight-dayum nikka ya shit was a thriller kinda scarry. badd dreams tonite. it had good flo, and good structure. the only way that black siinz got my vote is because he had what u had plus one. he had humor. u had suspence tho it was a bit predictable.. i knew it was a ghost or spirit as soon as u sed ur first couple of verses. Black-nice shit..had me laffin hard....nice way to go back 13 yrs and git a 7yr old's perspective on this shit. u beat him wit the humor and less predictable suspense. I digged this topical. Every other subjuect was tied vote-black siinz |
Blak siinz - hmm decent topical...very basic lines...but good flow....nice multis in there....stuck on topic....gave a twist to it....decent spit....jus work on ur complexity of the lines....give it a 6.7/10....
N Sight - wow...that was a very good drop...all the fact that it is true makes it great....complexity in ur dorp which is a plus compared to blak's verse....u had me into it and wanting to keep reading.....very good flow and spit.....give it a 9.1/10.... vote - N Sight for the complex verse.... |
i gotta give that to sinz his shit was hott and it was funny as heLL..good rhymes kid
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Blak Siinz..........your verse was pretty ill man i felt that you came pretty simple compared to your stuff i seen on old rb but i liked it. Your flow was was good and i liked your structure. Your aproach to the subject was quite good.....i felt that your closer was your best part because it wasnt anything that was expected in a topic like this. Good verse man
N-Sight........ wasnt really feeling your verse man. It was kinda scary and it was off in some spots. Your structure was a little off awell and it threw off your flow..however you did have good wordplay but im still going to have to go with Blak on this one for a better over all verse v/Black |
Flow-Black Sinz ur flow was tight i was really feeling ur opener and ur closer. N Sight ur flow was all over da place some lines were great, some werent. It was jus wack. Some didnt even rhyme
Orignality and Complexiy-I like Black Sinz structure to cuz da rhymes were flowing, ur jus didnt flow as well. Also same level of stuff Impact- Wow black sinz dat hit hard specailly dat one line, "Mom" I say "Why are you mad, I saved you can't you see." She says "No faggot, that guy was fucking me!. Ya dat was good but nothing to great urs N Sight Overall-Blacks was way betta then N Sight Vote Black Sinz |
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