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Metaskriptz 06-07-04 02:57 PM

what the hell....Stop swayin people to vote for you....I murked yo bitch ass so you setted it up in front lines becuz elevated people vote fairly so you had to get some noobs to vote for you.....and T storm you juss got murked so sthu...O yea sevn I murked you get over it...evryone tellin me I murked you but I told them dont vote..I murked ya wack self.....


This nigga is so cheap he even took off the avavatar so my punches wouldnt hit....Thats why he switched his avatar...He kno he lost so he switched it up..Fuckin cheater....do anything to win....

uppin for some real votes not instead of getting these Dqed

KillaCamFlow 06-07-04 03:23 PM

Really come on now ya know x won this battle im not just saying that because he in my crew really come on ....ya know he won this battle he just getting some ( 50% )D/R votes

DeHotBwoy 06-07-04 03:48 PM

Vote when i get bcak wait ill vote now


Seventhird had a decent verse but ur punches did not coonnnect as much

X ur verse was great Personols realli nice and punches connected

Break Down

X

Flow 8/10
Rhymms 9/10
Punches 8/10
Structure7/10
32/40

Seventhird

Flow 7/10
Rhymez 6/10
Punches 6/10
Structure 8/10
27/40

V/X good battle

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Archeologist 06-07-04 03:58 PM

okie dokie X takes this easily for a better verse and usin a decent quote in the rite place.. SevenThird your verse was good but you used quotes in the wrong place. you used a quote at the start of your vese big no no..
so X takes this for a better verse..

$ike 06-07-04 04:36 PM

ok flows goes 2 seven
stucture seven
balence seven
overall seven
vote-sevin third

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Know-Gimix 06-07-04 05:50 PM

Uppin this for votes again.... /`/`/`/`/`/`/`/`/`/`/`/`

eph 06-07-04 06:05 PM

X~
punches:7
personals:7
vocab:6
creativity:5
structure:5

7third~
punches:7
personals:9
creativity:4
structure:7
vocab:5

overall~
X: 30
7third:32

i vote 7third cuz his punches hit harder, was blunt with it, didnt use played lines or punches came, over all decently good....

vote:7 third

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.::N-Sight::. 06-07-04 06:51 PM

You Stay Third-Grade-Turd-Face- You as Dumb as Your Friends
How you gonna elevate -Can't Even spell "above" or "ascend"
The head of ya crew's Massively-fake- Just Like You
Cuz ya rhymes as reality based- as Chucky-2
Keep Callin me a Newb, It'll be Funnier when I win-This


^^ haha...rhyming similar to my style...nice (lol, yes patting myself on the back)...kinda imature punches...but shit made me laugh...so it works well enough

I am "SevenThirds the Greatness Ya crew will Ever Be"
2.3 Times or 200 plus percent-- thanks for mentioning

^^ Nice personals there...

22/30

This nigga is so played if he tried to be president he still wouldnt be on dolla bills
Becuz its really easy to murk someone who still rides his bike with trainin wheels
Murked this guy seventhird so much left him homeless so hes tryin to stay on a grime


^^^ Not feeling your opener...where's the diss..? how is him being on a dollar bill or not a punch...?

Yo can tell hes like 6 years old, Look at the bottom of his spit, its his bed time
The Quotin things is pretty old to the site why dont you wake up to ya reality
SevenThird is on the site 24 7 and now I juss murked him and left him with no personality

^^ Good attempt at personal...but needed to be worded better

Improve upon flow

20/30

Vote: 7/3

Mad Dog 06-08-04 08:49 AM

Uppin this for my man SevenThird..................

Mad Dog 06-08-04 11:18 AM

Uppin this again for 7 3rd and other crew battles goin on in my sig check D2R's forum to find out who's battlin who

SixX da FinisH 06-08-04 11:52 AM

damn...
 
ayo i gotta give dis 1 to X...ya rhyme scheme needs work but ya punches jus hit harder namean? i like sum of the wordplay... even tho it was stretched u jus came better prepared. neither of ya had real any multis that worked but iight. seven i liked ya style but i think u tryin a lil too hard to be intelligent... no hate but jus keep ya shyt simpler.. itll hit harder that way...

v/X
~1~

Know-Gimix 06-08-04 12:37 PM

lol.... Iight uppin this to get it voted on and closed for the last time...

Metaskriptz 06-08-04 02:38 PM

uppin....Stop gettin ya d.r votes and votin in noobs battles so they can vote for you becuz you voted for them....Such a battle d/rer Thanks sixx but ya didnt post ya poll

C.G. 06-08-04 03:49 PM

dis battle wuz bout even all da way thru personals were took by seven but punches and overall flow X did em

X

Ravage 06-08-04 08:19 PM

check it
 
flow-7/3
punches-tie x had the good punch bout all it was bout you being a newbe and young, nothin hard and personal, while 7/3 was dissin on x and his whole crew, but not enough elevatioin that y i chose a tie
personals-7/3
openin-x started off past ya bed time shit

my vote- goes to 7/3 punches and personals win battles


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