uppin leave a link an i'll get back at you

uppin...feedback plz

alright. It was alright, the only line i didnt like was, you keep me together and without you i fall apart. It could have been said without the fall apart section. But besides that, this was pure straight human emotion with no thought put into it. I am not saying it as a bad thing, you just shared all of your emotions without coating it with big words or some crazy metaphors. 6.5/10

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ay thanks fa the feedback...uppin

leave a link an i'll get back at ya...iight...uppin

I really liked this part:

I pray everyday but I just can’t seem 2 fa get it
you took a risk on me n I appreciate it
you helped me straitin up my life
an now I have everything orchestrated

Good work. Short but sweet.