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Wordz AhGod 07-11-04 12:54 AM

Marv, Gotta aint never vote on any of my shit befor, wat U talkin about? If anything I voted on U in that Black Haze battle and told U that he bit too. so how em I D/r? it aint like that at all kid. I was just feelin gottas verse more this time. sorry.

MARVOLoUsJ1009 07-11-04 01:52 AM

uppin 4 more fukkin votes.....................................

KISI 07-11-04 03:21 PM

props to both battlers that came out today, nice entertainment, i like it. but here's the judgement.


marvolous-you definately came out hard on this one. i felt an energy, that you were loud and rippin this one(i know it's text, but i'm a battler, a real one, and i feel energy)
it was nice, and a good flow to it.
dogg u need da quit tryin be tuff when u pussy i suggest u stop hero-
how many wins u got? u like da "online service" cuzz on da "net" u got "zero"-
that's hot. The energy of it all was the biggest thing going for this verse.

gottaasswhoopin4u-this verse was alright, i saw anus mouth tones about it, which i like. but it was virtually devoid of any punches, which are too key in a battle. so key that, you lost this one.

vote-marvolous

KISI 07-11-04 03:22 PM

help me out by voting honestly on this little battle so i can close it.http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131252

LaTiNKiTTeN 07-11-04 07:33 PM

JEa!!..look dickhead u aint fukkin with da punches & words dat i bring-
dont 4get "solo" killed u so dis gon be second time u got merk by a "king"-

LOL,NICE LINE

sombody get dis trash put in a crew,its only men dat dis fag's lookin da crew-
dogg u was about da get jump & left ya lil bro & he took da "asswhoopin4u"-
LOL,THIS WAS KINDA FUNNY TOO

u need a roll with ya fagget bar's,u think ya flow would embarrass marv??-
dis nigga ass is trash he's "on top of punches" cuzz he's "ova his avatar"-
(look)
? I GUESS HE REMOVED IT,CUZ I DONT SEE NO AVI....SO I CANT JUDGE THIS

dogg u need da quit tryin be tuff when u pussy i suggest u stop hero-
how many wins u got? u like da "online service" cuzz on da "net" u got "zero"-
(netzero..get it)
I GUESS ITS DECENT WORDPLAY,BUT I WASNT REALLY FEELIN IT,CUZ HE HAS SOME WINS........

after i drop dez few bar's just post up ya lame text and leave-
u fukkin borin while u sendin "threats" dogg "jay" is catchin "z('s)-
(jay-z...threats his song and da z meanin his bar's is puttin me da sleep..u'll get da punch)
WASNT FEELIN THIS WORDPLAY

aight since i took a minute cuzz i was gettin knocked off and on u gota hour da drop




nice drop, punches was hot, some hit hard at home/
but dogg i can kill u by talkin bout ur stupid sig alone/
OK,SO WHY DIDNT U DO THAT?SAYING U COULD IS NOT REALLY A PUNCH...WHAT U SHOULD HAVE DONE,IS HAD THE 2ND LINE AS UR 1ST LINE,THAN MADE A PUNCH ABOUT HIS SIG IN THE 2ND LINE OF THE BAR...


i can talk however i want, cuz arrogance is bliss/
u made mad crew references, but damn royal sickness dont evn exist/
OK PERSONAL BUT NOT THAT HARD OF A PUNCH


dog u shouldve ducked this battle, a loss is somethin u cant afford/
u call yaself the sickes on the site, but give shoutouts to niggas that dont even kno u on the board/(he made a reference to restricted in that rhyme in his sig)
THAT 2ND LINE WAS WAYYYYYYYYYYYY TOO LONG,N HOW DO U KNOW RESTRICTED DOESNT KNOW WHO HE IS? THIS ISNT REALLY SUPPORTED......
WELL,I GUESS HE MUSTA CHANGED THE RHYME CUZ I DONT SEE RESTRICTED IN IT NOW...SO I CANT JUDGE THAT PART


there alot of irony in his rhyme, cant u see/
how the fuck he gonna be king, when hes a bitch in queens/
LOL...THIS WAS GOOD

hes already sad i can feel the net tears/
its a shame that hes prolly gonna have that same battle in his sig for years/
HMMM...IF HE HAS THIS BATTLE IN HIS SIG,ITS EITHER CUZ HE WON IT,OR CUZ HE WANTS IT TO GET VOTED ON..........SO I DONT SEE A PUNCH...IF ANYTHING,THATS SAYIN HE GONNA WIN THIS.....OR THAT PPL ARE SLEEPIN ON THE BATTLE,WHICH DOESNT LOOK GOOD ON U EITHER

this nigga took so long he had to figure what he was talkin bout wit his own punchlines/
ill go over the limit to get this crackhead extra high, fuck 10 lines
HOW IS THIS A PUNCH? U SHOULD NOT HAVE GONE OVER 10 INTENTIONALLY........

OK,THIS WASNT THAT GREAT...............MARV...I LIKED UR FIRST 2 PUNCHES...THEY WERENT REALLY HARD,BUT THOSE WERE UR BEST LINES...THE NET ZERO N JAY Z LINES I DIDNT LIKE,THE NET ZERO WAS CONTRADICTING,CUZ HE HAS SOME WINS,BUT GOTTA ALSO HAD CONTRADICTING LINES,ABOUT THE BATTLE IN UR SIG,N RESTRICTED NOT KNOWIN WHO U ARE...CUZ HE CANT REALLY KNOW THAT FOR SURE..........GOTTA,U MADE THE MISTAKE OF JUST SAYIN THINGS THAT U COULD HAVE MADE PUNCHES WITH..(ABOUT HIS SIG)..ETC...SO UR BEST LINE WAS THE BITCH IN QUEENS......I'D SAY THIS WAS VERY CLOSE........BUT IF I COMPARE BOTH UR BEST LINES......MARV HAD 2 GOTTA HAD 1............THE REST OF THE VERSES WERENT THAT GREAT...N GOTTA GOT TO DROP 2ND SO U KNEW WHAT U WERE UP AGAINST,U MADE THE RULES OF 10 LINES N STILL WENT OVER...N U MADE THE THREAD N MADE HIM DROP FIRST....IF HE WANTED TO BE AN ASS,HE COULD'VE DQ'D U FOR THE 10 LINES SHIT,CUZ IT WAS UR OWN RULE...FEEL ME? ANYWAY,MARV WINS.....................


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