RapVerse.com Community - LyRiKaL19 vs unfortunate

-Lyrikal19.
I KNOW BITCHES LIKE TO RUN THEIR MOUTH THATS WHY I PULL A BLADE AND THEN YOU ARE OUT//
YOU SAID YOUR FROM THA HOOD, WEREN'T YOU A BOY SCOUT? EARNED YOUR BADGES IN WHAT...HOW TO TALK EBONIXS
flow was off and on, aight wordplay, weak punch
WHERE YO FROM HOMIE//
BETTER TELL ME NOW//
IF YOU CAN RUN MY LIFE BETTER//
TELL ME HOW//
flow was off and on, no wordplay, no punchline
CAUSE YOUR AS WELCOME AS WHITEY AT A POW WOW//
LIKE TO SEE YOU TRY ME NOW//
flow was average, aight wordplay, first punch was aight, should've switched the lines around
I'VE MADE YOU BECOME A PART OF MY PAST//
THE GOOD DIE YOUNG BUT THE BAD SEE LYRICALL CAST WHEN I BLAST//
U THINK U CAN LAST THEN COME ON HOMEBOY BLAST
coo flow, no wordplay, no punch

-Unfortunate.
he been gone so long, unfortunatley im bout to burn him like chek and chong
ill smoke you longer then a bong, beat you hard then a muslim beating a gong
good flow, aight wordplay, weak punch
you lieing to self lyrkial, those punches were so weak you need a marycle
like rhyming its unparable, crowds flock in bunches cause its so terrible
good flow, weak wordplay, weak punch
my punches mutalate the living, you can relate since im the one giving
try to compete i leave you spining,im undefeted and still goin on winning
coo flow, no wordplay, weak punch
i looked at your record its a relieve, he hasent even got a single vote i beleive
trying to win pulling shit yo sleeve, i beat this nigger so bad i just got to leave
coo flow, weak wordplay, weak punch
im gifted by all of the gods, you talk some more shit ill kill you with metal rods
try asking the mods, il ship you out and mail you to a guy near the cape cods
coo flow, weak wordplay, weak punch

Overall, Un got this. He had the better flow and atleast attempted punches. Un, you're trying to fit too many ideas into one line. Just focus on one idea and word it well mayne. Lyrik, work on your flow, wordplay, and punches mayne.

Vote - Unfortunate.