| ~Luciano~ |
07-29-04 12:51 AM |
Ok this was an ok battle but heres my breakdown
Bk you had some nice punches but some of em were kinda played and soft you gotta come alot harder and work on elevating you had some ok wordplay and ya structure was good but if you elevate it will all fit 2gether. you had some nice personals you coulda picked up ya wodplay tho.
Eye you had the overall better drop here you had some nice punches and some nice wordplay and nice complexity and ya structure was there. you had alot more complication in ya words and thats wha wins not jus jottin down some shit that u jus thought of while shittin. all in all it was a good drop
my vote~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Eye
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