thanks for feedback people still uppin lets get this ova wit

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hmmmm...
close battle.....
gballz beta vocab...
don..i liked his imagery more...
metas...more from don...
multies/structure...equal...
flow...both

overall.....ifelt gballz had the better vocab..more complex rhyme scheme...
but don gets my vote..simply because i jus liked his better..thought it had more imagery....

vote..don


sumone pls return a vote on the link in ma sig....

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good battle but im have to give this to don he's seemed more complex

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this was a really tite verse from both of u, i thought that the don had a better story and he told it better, he used better wordplay and metaphors, he started the battle weakly but made up for it with a really nice verse

c-ballz this was also a nice verse but u were just outplayed by don and his creativity n vacabulary just were better than yours

v - don