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No...elevate and come back.
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^^ Agreed.. haha good lookin out LE
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So Far Its
Durmil & I Uppin For More Tryouts |
Damn elevate well you could tell me what to elevate
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^^^Sure. I will quote your verse and do a line by line breakdown if you wanted.
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^^ Good lookin out bro way to help these kids elevate man
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Ten Lines is all I need to ffed these mc's that is recruitin for a team.
I create rhymes and descimate other mc'z rhymes so i make sure they can't reply/ Way too stretched... Why lie, I never Lie cause being nice is something i can't deny. Don't use lie twice...fucks up flow...forced multi... The kid prodigy so nice, I got jadakiss asking god why/ Uneven ryhme scheme...don't do it...only 2 ryhming lines... This ain't nothing for me I'm used to challenges. Being nice and being humble, it's hard but I balance it/ A'ight bar... I mean some times you gotta be cocky to certfy yourself as a good mc. Stretched... My rhymes is nice white powder, It was bout time I let him see/ Too elementary..."mc and see"? A six year old could do that... I'm from the hood but I'm tryoing to get out. Got more then 50 cent in the banks, so young buck in the game but he need to sit out(all the G-Unit Members)/ Attempt at punch...but way too stretched. If you would shortened the second line and made the first longer, woulda been a nice punch too. |
oh oh can i try out for this hahaha jp how come u maken this crew?
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good looks for the help my nigga
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I'm not black...but you're welcome.
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Uppin for tryouts... stop postin up in this bitch lols.. hoes...
ne ways trase its jus another crew imma be runnin.. like triggas but less herbish losl UPPIN FOR TRYOUTS.. |
yo you know i would be in it but i only got 2 names and they both tanken
but i got a feeling The Jury aint gunna be goin that far and crashin quit soon |
^^^I was hopin the Jury would get real active...so we would have some real competition haha...
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^^ Haha yeh flash u can co-lead this bitch wit me if jury folds lols...
anyways UPPIN FOR MORE HEADS.. |
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