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Yo i think Hoops er Calamity got this i mean i aint being funny TRASE but ur flow was stretched ta fuck and the flow in places was off a lil in places and hard to read, however that applies to both as i only really like verses in black or a colour which is clear but anyway. TRASE came good in places and had sum ok punches but Hoops also had the same, i think hoops came a lil harder and structure was less stretched then TRASES.
Also i think hoops had better personals and was also using better wordplay than TRASE in my opinion. V/Hoops |
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uuppppiin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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trase: your verse had a couple things hotter than hoops which were: the imagery that was off the chain it was so real like i was the person doin the shottin that made your verse hott...the topic itself you worked better than hoops but i feel you fell off a couple times but stayed mostly consistent...vocabulary was bad tho and so was the w/p and the multies...structure could have been better also
hoops: i was really feeling your verse it was all around hott...i think you edged this battle out with your structure w/p multies and vocab....very good topical piece...you stayed on topic for the most part and fell off only a couple times you didnt have as much imagery as trase but your multies and vocab made up for that i think that hoops edged this battle out with his vocab multies and w/p i think if trase would have used more of those he would have won very good battle vote: hoops ~!1!~ |
yo thankz for tha honest vote flow uppin for more.
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yea thanks for voting guys.. drop a vote, and leave some links so we can aid to lcose some battles..
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uppin on this battle.. only need two more votes.. drop a vote and leave a link
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Trase-Orginal Verse Pretty good for a first Time Though
but you was close and I liked it so keep doing more Hoops-Close also and you had a lil more Vocab and more and Structure ws good but lack in metaphores v/Hoops |
^^thankz for tha vote uppin ..............................
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yea good look^.. uppin for the last vote.. leave a link
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uppin on this last vote.. leave a link
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uppin on this battle.. drop a vote,leave a link
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I think im gonna have ot say....hoops won this battle because... i think he stay on topic realyl well..and use some strong wordplay on this topical...i think trase u did ok...and....i think ur wordplay was ok...buti think you lacked on carry the topic through the whole verse..nice shit tho...i gota give hoops the win for staying on topic the whole match and ...strong wordplay
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