les go les go i aint got till im dead to win ma first battle

Poetic justice-flowand structure was right on punches were nailed and funny too

prapper- lines and flow were way off your structure needs work but was still alright

Vote-Poetic justice

both had good structure and flow both had ok vocab and parapper had better vocab and his disses were harder poets verse seemed forced.parapper gets it with better punches'you want a bitch you better call on lassie'and better disses'only time you bust a cap is when you open soda bottles'
v/parrapper

thanx dawg c i told ya im tha best... one more vote'll put 5 thru this pussies chest... cuz i kilt him

my votes for papper1 overall he was better no lie peaace holla vote on these battle on my name

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