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Datruth took this hands down with actual good wordplay and similes and shit.
Gingerbread you had a good verse,but your wordplays werent as complex as Datruth.I liked your last line when you said: datruth hurts and bla.good line.work on making better wordplays and youll be good.but my vote goes to datruth. |
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Datruth: Nice wordplay, good structure and flow. Hittin punches and st8 multi's. Could of had a better opener. I've been tryin to figure out what oven do u have for him to run into. Im not diggin dat line. Ok ending and overall a decent verse.
GingerB: Flow and structure was there with some hard hittin punhes. Personals were on point. Ok opener and a nice closing. I like how u told him da truth hurts. Overall: The battle was a tight one. You both brought ur game to da table. Keep at it and always try to elevate. But my vote goes to da GBM hit my battle up....http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137344 |
vote on da prodigy vs troubledinocense an i'll return the favor
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coz you're an idiot that doesn't get punchlines.. the gingerbread man, ended up getting baked in an oven.. dummy |
this wuz close as hell...but ima give it 2 ginger cuz he had better personals
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hey you fuck... gingerbread man.. drop a verse in our battle man shit been like 3 dayz and u aint drop......
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truth...minds eye line was decent....vocab was aight....really only one punch in yoru verse that was good
ging.....you really had nothing in your verse.....some decent concepts but badly worded lines....yougot potential though.... v-truth...he had that punch that won it in my eyes oh and truth now you return the favor since you went againt the rv rules and posted a link to yoru battle before a vote your turn.... vote on any one of these: Tourn vs Femcee Tourn Vs DJulien |
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