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D-ICED 07-31-04 10:16 PM

708 you getting beat faster then alonely horny niggas errection and you couldnt shine in the closet you aint a star was a good personnal.star your flow was ok but 708s was better as were his punches and disses.struture was good for both of you.star you had 0 personals and that tornado shit was not hot gee is a dr he always votes for the worst verse and always for fems so hes either a ugly lonely nigga or a lesbian.708 gets the vote.




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~Lady Fiya~ 07-31-04 10:25 PM

not the best verse i seen from either of you but hey..

708- short verse but good quality (punches, things that matter) good job..

*The~Star*- nice verse also a lil' longer and nice use of multis...

closer-Star:
I’m stabbing ya rhymes up more than OJ Simpson stabbed his wife
That’s a infinite amount of times, cold-hearted, you longer have life

opener-708:
dis gon' be more one sided than the november election
i'm beatin dis bitch faster than a horny niggas lonley erection
^lmao, nice battle u two but in my opinion length isn't a factor it's the quality.. and neither one of y'all dropped a better structure so my vote..

708
good job Star mami u doin' ya thang, keep it up..
~wun~

Da Vinci 07-31-04 10:54 PM

Damn this was a close battle, I would have to say that The Star took this because of punches with more complexity. 708 your style was alright and it will probably get you through many peopel but you need to develop your punches a little more. Both of you had nice wordplay and flow. 708 you also have some okay personals nothing over the top hot, but keep elivate'n. The Star takes this with better personals and more creative punches.


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