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Punches- Katastrophe
Personals- Justify had one i think but it wasnt workin Flow- Justify Wordplay- Niether Multis- Niether Metaphors- Katastrophe Structure- Katastrophe all though ya last line was a lil strrreeettttcccchhheeeddd Originality- Katastrpohe Vocab- Tie 4-2 Katastrophe justify ya lines was just comin off a lil short if u wre to put more into it you wouldve had a better chance i think at winning this one katastrophe tha main thing i liked about your verse was ya personals thats maily why i gave this one to you.....keep elevatin one |
*****PUNCHES NOT PERSONALS^^^^^^^^^^^^it wouldnt let me edit my post lol
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Justify - Not really a good verse......You had maybe one good punch, "You'll be takin more hits than a pot heads bowl".......You had decent structure but tha rest of your verse was lacking good lyrics.....tha swiss cheese line is played.......And personals are good but no when they're fake.....how do u know he is white???......Aight drop...4/10 Katastrofe - Ya closing bar didn't really rhyme....but ya overall lyrics was better than Justify's and you had more punches that hit......The bar wit niagra and viagra wasn't necessarily a good punch but the two lines fit together perfectly some decent wordplay.......Both of you need to elevate and consider multi's and vocabulary next time.....Aight drop......5/10 Vote: Katastrofe |
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