lmao @ amaze saying i hade no metas haha .............

Voted For: KroNuz

yo J Trooper took dat shit but KroNuz yo shit was str8, but J Trooper took it, peace

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^- lmfao.... 2 things... one you didnt explain... lol 2 you voted for me on accident stupid.. haha...

This was feedback posted for J_Trooper
 

i can't vote on this but good battle ya'll......... nice work

yo i voted for da rong mutha fucka J trooper took that shit by far da otha dude was no where close my vote got fucked up but J trooper took it so he winnin rite now

dis new votin shit is fucked up, but next time etha of u have a battle holla at me cus i no wat to do now iite? , peace

Voted For: KroNuz

u had sum nice simple but nice punches
ur flow was continous east 2 read
overall good flow good battle 2 both
j ur flow was good
but ur punches didnt seem 2 connect rite like u were battlin...
but u werent in da mood 2 write so u wrote bullshit no hatin though ive seen yo drops u got skillz but seem in dis battle u were lackin i vote:kronuz

This was feedback posted for J_Trooper
 

I dont know if it was the time of night or the music im listenin to(people dont dance no mo) right now but this battle seemed kinda like ok. Both delivered some good punches. Imma give it to troop because i liked his flow a lil better

Voted For: J_Trooper

Yo, My vote is going to have to go to J Trooper.

1) You had more punch lines and more direct hits to KroNuz than he did to you.

2) Both of your structures were pretty good, they were easy to follow.

3) J Trooper had more of a rhyming status at the end of his lines, while KroNuz weren't really "rhyming"

ex:J Troop Gettin Rocked, Like Old People In Chairs That Move
You On'a Block?, You More Like Carlton From Bel Air You Fool!

Move and Fool dont really rhyme.

And also....

Ya Flow Is Wrong And If You Write Right Ya Blows' Might Miss
Plus Ya Style Is Like The New Rap Verse, Cuz Nobody Likes It !

Miss and It don't really rhyme.

J Trooper,

Geletin resembles ya Interior im established respect ya Superior
Im Domination. U not even Nomination i peeped the fear in You


Superior and You dont really match either...


But overall.........

My Vote is going to have to go to..

J Trooper

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. Vote removed due to freeposting to 20 posts..

Voted For: KroNuz

Illest Lines:
My Verse Is Hate Mixed With A Blunt Rage
And Ya Style Is Plain Like Rv'z New Front Page!

Ya Flow Is Wrong And If You Write Right Ya Blows' Might Miss
Plus Ya Style Is Like The New Rap Verse, Cuz Nobody Likes It !

Structure: KroNuz. His flowed better and had more uniformity when switching from bars.
Multi's: KroNuz. His structure and flow had that guarenteed.
Punches: KroNuz. Every bar had a hard punch. Straight battle verse.
Wordplay/Vocab: J_Trooper. Simply put, he had more vocab in his verse.
Closer: KroNuz. Wrapped up all the bars nice and tight with that last bar.

Winner: KroNuz: I'm able to honestly say that J really didn't stand too much of a chance in this battle.

upppin

This was feedback posted for KroNuz
 

OK HERE'S THE BREAKDOWN
FLOW-j TROOPER
STRUCTURE- kRO
PUNCHES - j TROOPER
META'S AND MULTI'S- TIE
OVERALL ENJOYMENT- J TROOPER

IT WAS A CLOSE BATTLE BUT IMA GO WIT J ON THIS ONE.. GOOD SHIT BOTH OF U THAT WILL SMITH LINE WAS CRAZY

why is this open... up for final vote..........................

Voted For: J_Trooper

arite...this was an arite battle...both of you came hard...what set this battle appart was the word use and the flow...Troops came harder and had more flow...he had good word use...kronuz u did also but it all didnt come together...my opinion...i liked this line by troop...Im the best in Deleviring Threats the best in Particular
U couldnt feel true Lyricism if u held onto Nas's Testiculars...that was a good one...and we all know nas crowned the best lyricist...good hit there...so my vote goes to.......J_Trooper on the fact that his was jus overall better...