I gotta give props to both... that was some good shyt... F.I. did the whole MaxPayne story line type of deal that added a different feel to the battle. It was almost set up like one of those old skool movies...

MaN... Ya whole joint was fire... This was prolly one of the best reads i've seen so far... very descriptive... nice word usage... i can see the images as you described them... that helped a lot... stayed on topic... realistic

F.I. ... Like I said, I like what you brought to the battle.... Ya joint was hot, too. I agree with the other dude, though, that said you kinda slipped when you started talkin about glocks and stuff... but still it wasn't a bad drop... stay focused on the whole sniper deal and your shyt's golden...

v/Manip

Vote manipulation.

both were dope as fuck and on some good storry tellin shit, like the whole topic of this

Flow intel, liked the whole phone call into and schem of your verse

I was feelin the conetnt in Manips a lil more, he had more of a deeper story and kept the whole thing dope through out