Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

i gotta give this manip she came with better structure n pretty good personal punches flow was good in most parts.i liked your wordplay,it was nice...marv..i got where you were going with your punches but they jus werent written wright..you had some really good idea's but jus dint capitalize on them..you would've had a better verse if ya tried ta shortin ya lines n work on your punches a little..but props ta both nice verses....
please retun the vote:
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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140239
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1480054

uppin.....................for sum votes..
leave ya links......

lol aight but her personals was fake dunn u aint see da link i left??? its nothin uppin

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

I gotta give this to him...this was an O.K....verse.....and his wordplay was ok..the liune that was hott was..elevate..line...it was pretty hot......marv...u supposed to be the best on the site .....not really showing it...i knwo you got skillz use them man....iight ....ok battle both of ya...

Vote.....Manipulation.....for..better sturc...wordplay and punches....

stop swayin marv...............i had personls,u didnt....uppin.............

This was feedback posted for MaNiPuLaTiOn
 

Dis battle was good
the only problem is that I cant vote yet
Ill be sure to vote on dis one

uppin............................................. ...

This was feedback posted for MaNiPuLaTiOn
 

Nice drop really feelin it
I liked ur structure punchlines and overall verse
TOO bad I cant vote yet but I will be sure to do it

uppinupp....favours will be returned......................

uppin

cumon peeps........................uppin........to get dis closed
leave ya links i will return honestly

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

Marvouls: this was iight but i thought you can do better ok punches and personals
MAnipu:your shit was good niceverse nice structure and you had good punches and personals tat hit hard

vote: manipu for a good verse

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can u explain.plz?...................................
uppin uppin uppin

Voted For: MaNiPuLaTiOn

Opener:marvolousj1009
Closer: marvolousj1009
Structure: MaNiPuLaTiOn
Flow: MaNiPuLaTiOn
Vocab: Tied
Punches:marvolousj1009
Personals: MaNiPuLaTiOn
WordPlay:marvolousj1009
Meta's: Tied
Orginality: marvolousj1009

Yo this was a Tight ass Battle.. I Didnt Realize how Tight it was until i started to Break it Down, I like dboth Of yah Verses.. But my Vote Goes to Marvolous.. For Better Punches, wordplay, and Orginality... Manipulation had good Personals.. But the Other Categories out Weighed that This Time..

Tight battle.. Return as Honset Vote on one of my battles in my sig!!!!!!!!!!

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fucks sake.ive won this bitch about 6 times.............
can sumone drop an honest.WELL EXPLAINED VOTE....PLZ......

return the favour.