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im dickridin his shyt wuz betta den ur shyt man i cant wait tyll we battle ma nigga imma rip ur shyt
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Uppn', let's close this one down already people.
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Voted For: Avanish
For Avanish Kid P Dizzle good rhymes but Avanish structure was betta and urz avanish was longer and betta metaphors Need Votes Wite Warrior vs lyricalflowz23 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Avanish
i like it cause you explaind that shit at the end Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Battle got reopened due to problems with votes, so I'm uppin'...
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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle
Dizzle wins this match pretty easily structure-dizzle punches-dizzle multies-dizzle creativity-dizzle dizzle's verse just packed a harder punch. Flooze need s work on rhymin his stuff better cuz it didnt flow very well n most of his punches were weak elevate on those so u can win battles holla at me http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=144971 |
Voted For: Avanish
pretty decent battle Flooze- i can see quite a bit of thought went into this verse. Opener was kinda weak but you picked up and hit with some nice punches like the oil line. Flow was ok but it fell off in some place and your structure is alright. The j-kwon line was pretty weak so you need to work on your consistancy but all in all it was a pretty decent verse P-Dizzle- Your rhyming was kinda basic, the booty call line was wack but the finish was sick. Make all your lines like that then you will deffinatly record more wins, for sure. Flow was good and structure was ok, just lacked consitant punches. Like i sed there were a few weak ones in there. Work at it though, there's deffinatly potential. So my vote goes to Flooze... Also please can you vote FAIRLY on my battle with Word Processor, been slept on for a while and needs finishing. Please take the time out to vote, i did.... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143304 |
Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle
~Flooze~ You couldn’t get a-“head” even if you had help from Ron Jeremy… You just trash talk but end up hiding like Oscar off Sesame*… kinda weak punch......5/10 He tries to have a slick name all funked up snoop dogg style... Except you sound more like J-kwon on a freestyle... Not feelin this at all...2/10 Here's this 17 old boi about to get merked by a 14 year old... Since your crew is 'Ill',if you 'spit' at me all I'll turn to is mold**. What does something being ill have to do with mold? 3/10 I bet you'd like yo mamma to 'Dizzle 'n' Pat yo diK'***... Even if you laced your verse with oil it still youldnt be slick... the first line was a good attempt at a personal...and the bottom was ok...5/10 Read my avatar and remember the name... My crew and I will just stomp ya flat as we continue to run the rap game... rap isn't a game....get that through your head....4/10 ~Dizzle~ Listen youngin' why you frontin'? You can't merk me/ You prolly still a virgin, and I got pussy when I was 13/ Not a very good opener...your supposed to attack him..not build yourself up..he's only 14...one year age diff..not that big of a deal...if he was like 30..it'd be a good punch...anyways...4/10 I can drop the mic dude, age don't matter, I'll fight you/ Explained your rhymes, thinkin' we must be illiterate like you/ pretty good, best punch i've seen so far 7/10 Dog you ain't moving Paul, you peeped my profile/ Prolly looked for my address to come try and get a booty call/ Not feelin this....4/10 You a fake bitch, actin' in your lame rhymes/ I'll see you nominated for a Grammy and an Oscar at the same time/ pretty good punc...another 7/10 Bullets do more than graze, fool, I amaze fools/ So shut the fuck up and go back to grade school/ that was decent too...but the fact that he's 14..and is probably still in grade school..made it not so strong....but 7/10 because the rhyme scheme was good... over all....I know both of you could of done a lot better...stop sleepin on eachother..thats how battles are lost folks...anyways.. Flooze: 19/50 Kid P-dizzle:29/50 Vote:P dizzle |
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