^^your prolly right except 4 seven third,but i put the post count high so noobs wouldnt vote so thats all i could really do...

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Voted For: DV8

first off this was a pretty decent topical battle.....gud verses by both.
i think dv8 came with the beta vocab.more complexity to his piece.....i enjoyed both stories,dv8`s beta vocab made his a lil more interestin ta read.
structure/flow woz fairly even......i think both had a few lines..
that were a lil stretched or 2 short.try even em out more(although its not as important in a topical).....
gud imagery by both, again i was feelin dv8`s a lil more,as i like the way in which the story was started.and the lil interlude bits were funny....dv8 u started to fall off wit ur rhymin 2 wars the end whilst wonka stayed consistent throughout.

overall id say......wonka up ya vocab,complexity....
dv8..try make ur lines rhyme a lil beta..

vote-dv8
tite battle but jus likin urs more..beta imagery