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intensify effect 08-19-04 09:06 PM

This was feedback posted for calamity
 
calamity: decent flow nice hard hitting personals no real punches thou, creativeness decent all around nice verse, 8.0

L.I: decent flow, a few decent diss, a personal that was ok no real punches here either but not a bad verse...

7.0

flow: tie
punches: none
creativeness: even
personals: Calamity
diss:calamity

which gives him my vote: ya both tryed for personals N diss N lacked punches which made the read kinda boring in a way but still decent battle

Sik Wit It 08-23-04 12:51 AM

Voted For: calamity

nice battle to both emcee's...but my vote goes to Calamity..tha twig shit..crack'd a grin on my face..haha..but anyway..he gets my vote cause..he had a slight~harder~punches than L.I. and a pretty good flow to it...

M-Eazy 08-30-04 05:25 PM

Voted For: L.I.

i think l.i. took this one with harder punches...i liked cal. punches too. but they were choppy and sounded incomplete....li had nice personals...but you stuck to one personal throughout the whole flow...cal...spread his shit around, and i liked that...but it sounded like he was just tryna get a point out...close battle, but li took it


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EyeDuel 08-30-04 05:39 PM

lol wackness all round...take this battle to the "front lines!"
and yall are called vets!?
pc

L.I. 08-30-04 05:43 PM

dunt hate... :)

UntouchableFlowz 08-30-04 06:06 PM

this was a pretty good battle...too bad i cant vote...calamity wins it tho

La Cosa Nostra 09-03-04 04:49 AM

Voted For: L.I.

Aiight I read this battle a while ago, and its still going so I thought I might as well drop a vote in..

Alrite, Calamity youve elevated a lot since I first saw you battle.. And I think you both matched up pretty well skill wise, however the one problem I did have with your verse is that I felt that you relied on links more than punches to back them up.. The thing with having links in your verse is that they should be secondary to the punch your writing..

El Eye came pretty good.. The punches were constant, I do think lines saying "Ive dissed enough" or "I just killed you" are played as fuck, but that closer was fuken hot so it kinda made me look past it..

Overall, Calamity had better personals, but L.I had more effective punchlines.. And thats where my votes going..

Vote- L.I

Good battle though..

anxiety 09-08-04 03:56 PM

This was feedback posted for calamity
 
Its inactive buddy... And you definetly could have come with hotter rhymes... The personals were actually the only good thing i saw with this entire verse... Needs more punches and better wordplay... Just a bunch of linked personals... 6/10

Dirty Nigga 09-08-04 05:56 PM

Voted For: L.I.

Daaaaamn
Tight Tight Battle
Hard To Call It...

I Think L.I Had Better Vocab n Added Humour, An Thats Always Good..

Structre Could Have Been Better, But As Is Mine, It Was Fucked Up, So I Had No Trouble Readin It

Nice Drop From U Both
Keep Elevatin!

ReTuRn ThE FaVoR!

P E A C E


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