thanks for the vote people ^^^ i will return the favor of a vote aight....

upp'in for more votes.....

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thats cold u snapped in this battle if i could it be u

upp'in for more votes fellas.......................

Voted For: intensify effect

IE takes this one. I think that Jokah talked about IEs girl too much. That was kinda his downfall. IE had the harder punches in this one too. Good metas and wordplay. that asshole line killed it mayn. Good structure to Jokah, but IE had the better verse. No hate...good battle.

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^^^ thanks for the vote everyone.................
upp'in to finish this.....

lets get this one ova people..........................................

upp'in for 1 more votes poeple lets get this one ova............

Voted For: intensify effect

my punch-lines connect's, while u try'in to figuer out the number in a phone booth
so there aint no way u pass'ing this match...... like u was sponsored by truth
/\. not a hot opener

and u'r verse got the youth toss'in-me gloves befor i kill-bums
cuz this jokah heat about to retier like ricky williams
/\. 7/10 nice

u spit with a stale-toung, no-wounder u AIM for a IM inorder to skip defeat
but i been turn'ing-tricks on the bored befor the X-games first-week
/\. self glory blah

plus i kill queers and everyone knows this guy blows fellas
so i'll put a hole in ya chest big enough to make ya asshole jealous
/\. another self not a punch there

i know why ya name jokah... cuz u know u aint a relevant spitter
be a quitter, cuz u about to get more negatives results then developing pictures......
/\. Nice closer

ayo man u kno i got enuff of tha dirrty green cash//
haha enuff to make ya girls legs spred like a rash//
/\. aight opener

my whole lifestyle has been straight up rags to ritches//
yur whole fam iz full up of dem kruked fags n bitches//
/\. nice again

it aint a headache its my knowledge and iam sick in tha head//
this aint magic tricks but get so girl in ma bed it'll b a trick in tha bed//
fuck tha beef and turkey shit for dinner i want chicken in stead//
/\. wtf where's the punch?!?

got mad connects, like ca computer-to-a-mouse//
we dont click right,u get left wit a shooter-at-ya-house//
/\. ???

yo iam a cat this dudes a mouse so he lookin fo some cheddah//
ya niggas kno straight up dat tha Jokah ..is way fuckin bettah//
/\. ???

I thought Jokah had this...untill i read his verse

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