This was feedback posted for Ice Pick
 

Icy u win. u had better punches, personals, and your verse made more sense. the structure and flow go to intensify. icy u also got word play. "Your on everybodys dick ...Shit you mite as well ask them to pull their pants down
Put ya hands up if I'm the illest rapper, cause I E the whackest..HANDS DOWN!" lol i like that. peace

uppin'..........the vote people, not asking for much

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Voted For: Ice Pick

Man this battle was pretty good but i think im going to have to go with ice pick he flowed betta and he had whay in the hell better punch lines but i can take any of you lil bitches but im voting for ice pick

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Voted For: intensify effect

i vote for this because it was simple and too the point unlike my last 2 posts which i admit defeat, other guy used the word down twice to rhyme and i dont like repetition, and i didn't like the other guys layout.

Voted For: Ice Pick

close battle kinda

punches-ice
multiz-ice
wordplay-ice
flow-intensify
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vote-icepick

now go vote on my battle vrs xxtayve n the other 1s in my sig....thanks

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close battle my ass


he got roasted

had the battle reopened cause he thought he could get another vote and he did

YOU MUST BE PROUD

Voted For: Ice Pick

lol ice pick took it to you haha thats funny intensify bonner you suck but you might be able to get a win from me but still you suck for your age

Voted For: Ice Pick

aight this was an easy decision for me i gotta say ice pick came with some pretty tight shit n good punches although the .......is a lil much at times its minor compaired ta your wordplay n well structured punctes...i dint quite get the finisher but even without it you had a much stronger verse...ie...i was'nt feeling much in your verse srry man...
id say your opener was your best line..keep elevating..