uppin uppin 4 dem votes y'all, n vote in detail. Peace

Voted For: Elusiv G

A hard battle for me to judge...neither really had any punchlines. But both of them had nice structure. So...I looked at it line for line and looked for a line that made me look at it twice. Didn't really find any but the one where he said "ironically gonna be merked." So that's the line that got him the win in my book. You also had some good vocab. But Merk, you had some good ideas. Just make some punches!

Voted For: !Mc Merc!

!Mc Merc!
structure is good.. flow is on target.. u had no multis.. wordplay was pretty good.. some of ur punches connected.. decent personal..

Elusiv G
structure is good.. flow is good for the most part.. u had a few multis.. no good wordplay.. none of ur punches connected.. no good personals..

Overall
Elusiv G had more multis.. both had a good structure.. both had a good flow.. !Mc Merc! had the better wordplay.. more connecting punches.. and better personals.. so basing off of that.. !Mc Merc! gets my vote..

VOTE - !MC MERC!

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig.. thanx..

Voted For: Elusiv G

i'll give it to Elusiv G no hate though

elusiv G: better flow, not the best opener, not the best closer, but you kept it going, alright wordplay , your structure was short and simple , and not as played out

mc merc: nice but i jus wasnt feelin it after the 2nd line, you had a good opener , good word play then it sorta fell off no hate though good word play but it was close ,a elusiv had rythm so yea

vote//elusivg

damn..won't let me vote. I must not have enough post of somethin....but good battle from what I see. :-)

Voted For: Elusiv G

Aiight heres the deal The other guy-i felt that you didnt come as hard as you should have, and let it be known that those multies didnt go unoticed....but if your goin to do them keep them goin all throughout the rhyme you would skip a couple of lines and then do another multi bad idea cause it threw me off cause i was expecting another multi but ended up wit nothing............Elusive- i felt that you came harder wit ya rhyme aaight punches but great word play....but not very diverse try using more than two rhymin words....this was a very close battle but i got to give it to Elusive he just came harder.........V/Elusive......Please return the favor wit an unbias vote....its a topical and the topic is deepression...........http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=147500