Voted For: Eyvon

evyon more wordplay and way betterpunches...
personals blah were good...
flow was good...
so was structure...
i'd give evyon a 10/10
flooze needed more wordplay and harder punches...
flow was way off...
structure well at least i could read it...
i'd give urs a 5/10
so evyon wins this battle...

Voted For: Eyvon

oo tricky flow and nice as punches, i think that Eyvon prepared a lot more but that is ok it was cool to read, vote to evon

aight. uppin

This was feedback posted for Eyvon
 

lol...iight jusy dropping a feedback...

eyvon u got a gd vocab and gd punches...my only advice is to make ya lines of the same length so it flows better and ur verses will be hot...

flooze i felt ya verse big time..ur last line was funny yo....and nah-ah ur verse wasnt wack it was cool...

both were good...


peace

thanx so no hate on us right Yvonne?

Voted For: Eyvon

That was siiiiiiick

nice verse eyvon, real humouress punches...
I showered the slang, simple as A,B,C's
Skip over the D's and rock the microphone with E's
Dethrone femcee's and I'ma max alone
Relax your dome like a solo from a saxophone
So facts are known, writers get treated with shocks
I rock a beat harder then you could beat it with rocks
I'm greeted with flocks, of fellow follower's singers
You couldn't make the fans throw up their hands if they swallowed their
fingers
^^^^^^^^
The best part of the battle, humouress, witty, smart, hard hittin...

eyvon got this battle hands down