Blah?? this is still on?? haah
o well upping if it is still on

upping please vote

Voted For: Paramik

vote:Paramik

reasons why i voted for you:

1.tight asss punches
really liked hoe complex they were

2. nice wordplay:
that BP line was good and so was the bible one

3.structure:
very easy to read
(BP's was choppy)

4.overall loved the verse

good job mayn

check my battles when they finnaly SPIT!!!!

lol
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Voted For: Paramik

Im Votin For Paramik, Cuz His Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Pretty Decent, Both Of There Rhymes Were Okay But Para Came A Lil Harder With It Tho

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gatdamn peeps postin bad feedbacks

Voted For: The Black Plague



Good battle....Para your flow was good, and your structure was good but punches and personals were weak, the BP line was the most creative but still just eh, didn't really see any multies and a few metas but nothing great.

Plague....your flow wasn't great and the structure was bad but you made up for it with creative punches, personals were kinda weak but punches were nice, metas were good, didn't really have multies, but decent drop

Flow: para
Structure: Para
PUnches: Plague
Opener: Plague
Closer: Plague
Metas: Plague
Creativity: Plague

Vote: Plague

Voted For: Paramik

aiiiiiiiiiight

paramik got this...

more complex wordplay n better personals, not as good punches as i've seen ya drop paramik, but on the whole a decent drop......the only thing u lack is maybe the humur in ya rhymes, but if that aint ya style, it aint ya style (nobodys gonna fault ya for it)
decent drop on the whole...u got my vote..

aiiiight, the opener was nice n hit real hard, but uhmmm....paramik had the better structure lol, but yea, real nice opener, wasnt really feelin the lil flip line, kinda played ot man....that cost u big in my opinnon, but still, some decent metas n punches, lacked personals in my opinnon, it was an aight drop tho, keep em comin...

p e a c e

Voted For: The Black Plague

ima have to give this one to u dawg....cant be a d/r or hate vote cuz both are in Mindz Kollide...i just think BP punches were a LIL betta...just becuz they were some funny punches too..ya opener was good...betta then P's...closer goes to Black..seein as thought it was a lil funny...not really hard to get on challenged peeps...but still it was betta...both had some personals so ima have to give this to black on punches...o yea...yall stay active in the forum now

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Voted For: Paramik

aight you got this battle on lock....

paramix: aight you need to work a lil harder next itm ebecuz that was kinda wack.......lbut good battle thought you need to work a lil harder i no you came come better than this......but just actaully try next time..i no he was wack but still you need to try hard eveerytime.....

BLACK: you was all over the place with those strechted lines...just work on oyur structure and you will be 50 percent better...and also work on your neta4s and personals...everyone loves a good personal.......but next time aplly yourself more.....

vote=paramix

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WTF this was explained and shit...^^^

Voted For: Paramik

Tight battle, close one to call.................

Black Plague u dropped a nice verse, it was consistent mostly but the flow fell off a little coming to the end, u need to try nad shorten ure lines and keep them the same length. u had some nice punches rollin some hard, some not so hard, but uer first line, u cant really be dissin his structure when ures is all wack, personals were not that good, i could only see a couple, nuthin that really struck him, u shud try playing off his name and shit more. wordplay was gud, nuthin too basic, some gud complex shit in there, some played stuff, but overall a nice drop.

Paramik a hott drop to, u really brought the big guns, ure flow was consistently gud all the way through, u kept ure structure together which kind of fucked up BP's first line. u had the punches in there hitting hard, some gud personals, especially the nice play off of his name using the BP gas station shit. the KKK shit has been done too many times before, the rayman shit was funny though, some original lines in there that i dont think i've heard before. rhymin was basic some places, but a got a little more complex at times, more complexity though, need to elevate that shit. overall a tight drop and i think you bested Black Plague in this battle.

***One quick pointer that i keep on saying, don't bother to explain ure punches, real MC's should be able to get them in the first place, and if they can't then they shouldn't even be voting***

VOTE: Paramik

Voted For: Paramik

I seen ya other verses, ya "structure" is off like that of the leanin tower of Piza
You not on my level..I'm "Everywhere You Want To Be" like ya credit card Visa
^^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD WORDPLAYS AND AN PUNCH NICE

"Like A Pimp" wit Lil' Flip i'll drop a verse, and leave this "Ho on tha floor"*
You dont get respect...You get hit up more than the local dealers door
Para you from Florida? Battle'd me and i knocked you out like Hurrican Charlie
You try to shatter my ego, but Im like B.Willis from unbreakable..U can't scar me**
^^^^^^^^^^^ HA NICE PERSONAL AND AN PUNCH GOOD FLOW NICE WORDPLAYS NICE MAYNE


Ya last battles have been 2 liners... cuz you can only come up wit 1 line at a time
You read my verse and it leveled you, like you sniffin pain't...It's fryin ya mind
I can see by your avvy that you hittin keys in a desperate attempt to contest
But you winnin this battle would be unlikely, like homeless men bein put udner house arest
Kid thinks he gansta, but he's only "Strapped" when he puts on his velcro Sped shoes***
I KO'd this fool, leavin his ass passed out, gassed, harassed like holocostal
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE VERSE,,,,,LIKED DA CLOSA AND DA WORDPLAYS U USE AND DA PUNCHES (WERENT HITTIN) BUT IT WAS COOL DOUGH








This wack textcee thinks he can beat me, I'll bring out my rifle.
Cause Black Plague thought he could steal verses by owning a bible.
^^^^^^^^^^ NICE OPENER GOOD PUNCH


Bitch claims he is the earthquake, but I already got his ass shook.
He couldn't drop hot rhymes, if he fell in love with a poetry book.
Must be lying, says he 18 but spit wack, I know this kids in youth.
Speaks the truth?, but said more lies than in the Movie “Phone Booth.”
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ LOL NICE MAYNE GOOD PUNCH (HITTIN HARDER)


Fags like a dull pencil, I’ll sharpen him so he can better “get the point.”
My lines could get this guy “moving out”, even if he’s an immovable joint.
Like losing AOL connections, “BPs” punches can’t ever “connect.”
Thought he could make his lines stronger, by putting special effects.
^^^^^^^^^^^ HA GOOD PUNCH NICE MAYNE GOOD PERSONALS



I bet he wouldn’t want to kill me if he joined the Ku Klux Klan. *
And Black Plague can’t even throw a killing punch, if he was Rayman. *
^^^^^^^^^^^ GOOD CLOSA GOOD VERSE

I HAVE TO GIVE DIS TO PARAMIK CAUSE HE HAD BETTA PUNCHES (HARDER) AND GOOD FLOW

BLACK U HAD GOOD FLOW WORDPLAYS BUT PUNCHES WASNT HITTIN IT GOOD VERSE DOUGH KEEP IT UP MAYNE

V-PARAMIK CAUSE OF HARDER PUNCHES AND FLOW PLUZ PERSONALS

~PEACE~

Voted For: Paramik

this was an ok battle...was pretty even.paramik..some ok punches...on and off.flow and structure was good..aight wordplay...some good personals...overall decent verse...

plague..another aight verse.....punches were aight..didnt hit has hard as paramik tho..some ok punches again..wordplay ok..overall aight verse...

close battle guys..my vote=paramik

return the favour wit an honest vote plz:)

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damn this been on for long.............................................. ..

Voted For: The Black Plague

some real close shit.. but i gotta go with BP he just had harder punches.. Paramik i know u can come harder than that.. spitting weak punches... BP ur structure was fucked.. try shortening ur lines or making ur font smaller its hard to read.. but u still took it due to the fact that you had a little bit harder punches then Paramik.. Good Job by both