This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY
 

SHOTTABOY

ELEVATE

YOUR SHIT WAS FUCKIN CORNY and WACK

Voted For: GangsStarShit

GangStar has my vote...
He had some pretty-nice hard punches that landed...
Decent structure *wasn't stretched out*...
A nice flow..*i liked tha way u quoted tha shit he said & used that in ur rhymes*...
A sick vocab...

sHoTTa yo shit was good too...
Your punches weren't as hard as your other 1'z in ur otha battles...and tha flow was decent...

Ice Pick Is One Of The Many Reazons I Say VETS ARE DICKHEADS...

He Quick To Hate Prolly Cause Gangstar Ridin His Dick Too....

Fuck These Gay Ass Dick Ryders..
Gangstar Is Elementary As Fuck...

He Dosent Even Know The Meanin Of Vocabulary...
An He Had NO PUNCHES...
Hes Garbage, Fuck Ice Pick n GANGSTARSHIT, They Are Obviously Havin Gay Cyber Sex 2gether

1 Word 4 u...sore loser...u got beat by "elementary rhymes" and fuck what ur sayin about dick riding...come up wit sum evidence...can ya find any...NO...coz there aint none...i'm winnin by honest votes bitch get it in ur head

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Voted For: GangsStarShit

damn...close battle. But I think u got this one from the last three bars you dropped. Yaw both was on each others asses. But I like this flow. I think Shottaboy's flow was abit off. Usually your flow is on point shottaboy but this verse was off abit. And it was nice how you quoted his rhymes too. Nice battle from both of you.

Return da favor and gimmie a honest vote on this battle.

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