thanks a lot for the feedback...but I am confused as how the subject matter is not consistent...the subject is rooted into a story of mine...and every line has something to do with how i feel about the story...emotionally or physically..or it is explaining the story.....I'm not arguing with you....I am just wondering what stuck out to you as "Non consistent"

Shits tite, i wouldnt nominate it as best though but i was feelign ya shitit was deep, ya was ok...
How long did it take you to write this and be honest now....

thats was deep shit, it was tight, keep it up~

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Deep drop...nice idea...good flow. I give that like a 8.5/10. That's like one of the best drops i've seen since i've been on da board. Keep it up

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nice drop man keep droppin aight i likie to see it...

uppin....

nice drop
i could see wat u meant
nice overalll
how long it took to make it


also peep my open mic

pretty dope... good rhyme scheme... keep up the good work.. and ps. join my crew... just playing pc..

paramik....took me about 35 minutes..i woke up one time at 530 in the morning..and started writin

upping since i feel this is geting left out

that shit was hot, give u a 10/10. Love is complicated ain't really much u can do about except don't love at all or go with it. My fave line was
"Says she cares about" me, but she thinks labels are stupid..
Feelin hurt I make a hitlist sayin "first dude is cupid"..
good stuff

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uppin for you sons of bitches