E Looch |
09-10-04 10:55 AM |
Voted For: Poet
i hate topicals but i like this topic good shit by both
poet-good perception and depth threw the whole verse i like the way u apporched it and laid out a story of how the person thought then good description as he went threw the rest of his complications stayed on topic pretty much the bank didnt really need to be in it but i seee what u was doin just gettin it set up for the shootout overall nice verse good shit kid
mad dog- fealin ya approach to good shit aswell hood shit got the bullets chasin u down constently till they catch up with had imagery aswell took a different approach kinda like menace to society at the end of the movie is what it reminded me of lol nice verse kid
overall im gonna go with poet for goin more indepth and layin it out a lil better but mad dog ya shit was nice no hate
return the favor me vs phantom :thumbup:
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