Voted For: Ice Pick

Does anybody believe in structure and flow anymore?
Guess Not.

Any how.
Eka
Your lines were too short. Not to the point. and farfethed.
Your metiphores an wordplay was rather dumb.
for example.
beef like where the lasso
Not liking your verse at all.
Ice Pick
Way to stretch a bar into a line.
Other than your structure the quality was fairly good.
I liked your closer.
EK be my guest & get HYPED cause I'm like rit-A-lin
U couldn't FREAK it if U battled in the MISSIONARY position'
Only thing is. stop bre-a-kin things up an CAP'in like that.
Believe me. We can see punches. Don't need Help.

Pretty easy take for Ice I think anyways

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Voted For: Ice Pick

ice pick brought the wit in his verse.. both had sum wordplay, ice pick's stuck out more.. both structures were fucked up so neither with that.. best closer was Ice Pick.. Ekademic your closer was played terribly.. opener wasn't too bad.. the harder punches came from Ice Pick.. watch the wordiness, Ice Pick, you could have delivered sum of your punches better but your words were inverted at places.. this was one-sided basically, but not bad on either parts.. good luck with this battle.. but Ice Pick took the win, my opinion..

my vote/ Ice Pick..
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