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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
hum alright battle puches-shotta stuture-catac mutis-shotta overall-shotta Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: CataclyzM-i-C
shottaboy ya flow was ok but u had alot of streched lines ya punches wasnt hard hitting some was ok but noting more no personal no multis no vocab creativeness was average and u probley could of did better what happen? cat ya flow was easy to follow punches was decent, last bar was a good ending, but u had some played punches as-well creativeness was average, multis none, personal i guess the last bar was a flip on u'r hes name... cat verse just edge it out in my eyes.... |
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Voted For: CataclyzM-i-C
dis was coo' but easy... tho cataclyzmic is on my muthafukin nerves i always vote honest... shotta boy... whats going on kid...dat was bad...no hate...but it was structure was shot to shit as well as da flow... punches were not hittin to say the least...and i didnt like da personels...i know u could do better... cataclyzmic... good shit...u kept da focus on shotta wit an ok flow n ok punches...not dat seriouse but coo'...nice metas tho they should have been worded better...u streched some shit too.. but shottaboys verse made urs look a hole lot better overall better verse goes to cataclyzmic........ vot on my shit verses drastric measurez fuck cataclyzmic...fuck shottaboy...im out! peace |
ayo cat
12-14 lines default settings was really good? |
Voted For: CataclyzM-i-C
k cata took it only because he had much better punches, umm both of you need alot of elevation, better word choice, as well as better structure, shotta what the hellll is up wit ya structure? it was a lame battle, both of your punches were weak but cata i guess hit him harder if you wanna call it that, i didnt try in my last one and i think it was better than this, but what eva , both of you need more organized punches, only reason cata is gettin this one is cuz his structure is actually readable... o yea did i mention you need a mucccch better vocab , my suggestion read the dictionary, or something you could drop alot better with it no hate jus spitt'n as i read vote//CataclyzM-i-C *not by a long shot though |
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