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Voted For: Trooper
Aiight, this battle was pretty easy to judge.. Troop got it because although dizzle came with some alright punchlines, it didnt follow through.. Whereas troop came with good shit from the start and it carried through to the closer. Dizzle, best advice I can give you, is to make your disses more consistant.. vote- Trooper Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Trooper
Cool battle...both came alright...Trooper had sum alright meta's...just could be worded better...but good...P-Dizzle had sum ok shit to...this was a pretty even matched battle...Trooper was more consistent in this with his punches...P dizzles last two bars gave Trooper the win...just didnt come hard enough...work on wordplay you guys...keep elevatign cuz ur getting better...good battle! Hit this up please...its slept on... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=143671 Thanks... |
This was feedback posted for The Kid P-Dizzle
nice drop P way to rep the crew
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Still uppin' for more votes, let's finish this one folks...
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Yea look at u
talkin shit bout me Takein off votes hm Bitch Made |
This was feedback posted for Trooper
just check'n the count
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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle
close battle to me Lets Keep it Actually on Factuals you dont have any Factions You Resemble a Spine Injury Victim~~Come with no Actions decent opener first line was decent wording messed it up the punch was ok easy wordplay You will Never "Shyne" in any of your Delivered Rhymes or Lines Dizzle Givin out "Gifted Scriptures" is like 16 Bars spit by Mime's lol.. ight punch and set up good flow Dont Underestimate your Commander and Chief Let me be Bleek Take's Lyricism to Write like Tonsel'Itis Im takein away your Speech umm this was filler i hope weak attemtp at a punch had wordplay but i dont think the punch connected very well brah flow was coo again Your 9-2 So you Only Surface once in a while Like "Field Mole's" u Droppin Sic is like an Ankle and Knee Amputee kickin Field Goals lol.. not a bad closer good similie in first line punch was decent basically sayin it wont never happen so not very original I'll put the "mac" to ya "dynasty" like Tracy to the Rockets Jimmy reps the D 'cuz he wants what's in between my pocketz... first line was ok the punch was nice made me laugh at that shit I'm not Iraqi but I'll decapitate this Trooper You ass, I'm cleanin' this shit off RV, it's The Kid Pooper-Scooper... um weak bars honestly tried at his name but the punch didnt connect to me decent wordplay though This jerk is rude but I'ma merk this dude Troop puts in plenty of work on the corner - will work for food... lol..nice flow above average punch wasnt that good though Go back to "Council"-ing, sayin' you'll KO me in 8 lines I just killed you, oh fuck, I just commited a hate crime... fist line was nice but the punch fucked it up could have killed him with that set up but messed it up with that punch overall close battle but p dizzle came with more attempts at personals some connected some was way off but still had an overall better verse to me trooped ya shit was coo wit all the similies no real personals but in the closer everything else u just stuck his name in it neither really had real strong punchs to mebut close battle here ya'll both about on the same level nice battle kids |
Ayo still uppin' this shit, let's get some more votes here...
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Voted For: Trooper
yo dis goes to troopa man but Kid u had some good lines son, I'm not Iraqi but I'll decapitate this Trooper You ass, I'm cleanin' this shit off RV, it's The Kid Pooper-Scooper that was a pretty good one but u need more peronals and mayb a few more harder punches Troopa dawg u gave it to him specially wit this lineYou will Never "Shyne" in any of your Delivered Rhymes or Lines Dizzle Givin out "Gifted Scriptures" is like 16 Bars spit by Mime's that was funny as hell good battle yall but from harder punches and betta wordplay this goes to troopa v/troopa yall retrun da a favor links at da bottom |
Voted For: Trooper
breakdown for sizzle I'll put the "mac" to ya "dynasty" like Tracy to the Rockets Jimmy reps the D 'cuz he wants what's in between my pocketz... Opener was blah, punch was fair nothing special4/10 I'm not Iraqi but I'll decapitate this Trooper You ass, I'm cleanin' this shit off RV, it's The Kid Pooper-Scooper... Iraqi lines are really played3/10 This jerk is rude but I'ma merk this dude Troop puts in plenty of work on the corner - will work for food... This was jus wack 2/10 Go back to "Council"-ing, sayin' you'll KO me in 8 lines I just killed you, oh fuck, I just commited a hate crime... Clever closer, ya best line but not very hard 5/10 Overall:14/40 Trooper Lets Keep it Actually on Factuals you dont have any Factions You Resemble a Spine Injury Victim~~Come with no Actions Creative opener, wording wasn't right tho..7/10 You will Never "Shyne" in any of your Delivered Rhymes or Lines Dizzle Givin out "Gifted Scriptures" is like 16 Bars spit by Mime's Opener was played, punch was played 3/10 Dont Underestimate your Commander and Chief Let me be Bleek Take's Lyricism to Write like Tonsel'Itis Im takein away your Speech Creative again....6/10 Your 9-2 So you Only Surface once in a while Like "Field Mole's" u Droppin Sic is like an Ankle and Knee Amputee kickin Field Goals Kinda blah but decent...5/10 Overall:21/40 Not a close battle both came weak but trooper was better of the two Vote: troop |
Ayo, for some reason this battle was re-opened, so I'm uppin'...
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p dizzle shit wasnt all that but it was better thatn this waste more personals more punches more everything...that hate crime rhyme was hot also was feeling ya personals p vote 4 p dizzle |
Uppin' again, should be the last time I have to...
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Ayo, uppin' once again, damn people quit sleepin' on this...
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Uppppppin'.....
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