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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
flow and structure-shottaboy,insane gotta work on it a lot,one line was short then the next line is long, try to have syllables matching in each line punches/personals-shottaboy,threw more and they hit harder,insanes were ok and he gave an attempt at some metas but shottaboy overthrew it vocab-shottboy, insane tried with the last 2 lines but most of shottaboys verse was filled with vocab no hatin on insane both did good, honest vote good luck peace |
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
basically, shotta got this coz he actually had punches ... insane ya really need to work on ya shit. No Punches at all, ya spoke about yaself all the way through. Nice Verse Shotta Vote: ShottaBoy |
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY
you killed him short i loved it it was just bootyfull i mean it you just killed him \ ..Claimin U Ah ''GangBanger'' When All Them Boys Did Was Run A ''Train''... ..They Fucked U n Beat U An U Still Wanted To Give Em ''Brain''... i loved that line man it was great |
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