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Voted For: untouchablekilla
dude man untouchablekilla got this one straight up no beefin on trojan's lines but you needed more work on the punches and not even any personals and killa is right you do have a weak structure but it still was a nice battle untouchable got a 8/10 and trojan got a 6.5/10 wasnt too bad i liked it Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Trojan
trojan got this it was really good, the flow,creativity,and punches,multies and vocab...it was a sick verse and had some really good punchlines that had multies to spice it up even more |
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^will explain more so my vote wont get taken off
flow trojan, i felt it was easier to read and more things matched correctly punches-trojan had more and they hit good i was really feelin the punches personals-none didnt notice any creativity-untouchablekilla i thought had some things that were more unique compared to trojans overall i think trojan got it it was a good battle though peace |
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Voted For: untouchablekilla
TORJAN.. ya punches are like fans to pac...they always gon miss me... i use complicity in punches,to lyrically burn this emcee... 1ST LINE WAS GOOD 2ED FELL OFF n TO ME MADE NO SENSE.. ya could put macs in ya verse,and it still wouldnt pack heat...* ya could vote for ya self five times,but ya still gon get beat... SET UP DECENT FOLLOW WAS WEAK am treatin ya game like a fat bitch...aint no chance its gettin a look... id have to be high on some chronic shit...for both of them to look good...** CHRONIC DONT MAKE U SEE THINGS BETTER THAT ARE UGLY LIQUER DO... WASNT FEELING IT.... am truly tht ill....im lyrically sicker thn somebody wit flu... ya lines played so much like a lil kids brand new PS2...*** 1st line was weak, follow was decent untouchable...shit...looks like ma rhymes got ya wrapped... u made a mistake..dont ever come battle me without ya metal packed...**** weak N played concept but i've seen it worded way better... u aint killin shit bitch...am twistin ya wordz round am bound to merk ya down...leave this fag lookin like a clown... eeeeh.... dont fool yaself man..ya stupid..our mindz aint never gon collide... ya still couldnt be up on ma level...even if u took an helicopter ride...***** decent cuz i still grasp what u was trying to say N do... ya lookin straight at the screen..kid..tht puts ya behind ma bars... locked up..tht makes ya owned..like ferrari owns cars... nah ending was lacking a punches or diss or personal wasnt to raw in this battle word-play was iffy N weak at times flow was ok creativeness just wasnt good.... 5/10 killah untoucabalekilla really a untouchable vet will never answer to threats used ya verse to whipe my ass, and i still aint fellin ya text preety good opener... trojan you cant topple me, im about to beat ur ass properly The only way you could match my skill is when you literaly copy me decent.... my lines shine, rhyme after rhyme to go and blind your eyes hit from the blindside, not like u... hittin on bi blind guys* haha shit was funny to me decent diss.... my style has readers eager to read avoid the drawnout suspense…/ your weak structure promotes little change like a DNA sequence ok.. its no lie u've been ripped like people with dead plasma punch's will leave u short on breath like midget's on asma good hit... fuck this last line,i dont need it,this is the only useless line i need I just type words like oxygen,so i give ya some time to breathe ending was weak.... but u still had decent hits decent diss flow was good creativeness was slightly above average all around not a bad verse... 7.5/10 |
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