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Status 09-27-04 01:12 AM

uppin for votes....c'mon where they at..........we both just need two more

Status 09-27-04 03:38 PM

uppin for votes//..............c'mon where they at.....damn man./......

Status 09-27-04 07:03 PM

uppin for votes...........man how is this getting slept on.......

Status 09-28-04 12:19 AM

uppin for votes/........man why is this really getting slept on

King Solo 09-28-04 06:05 AM

Voted For: creaTivitie

Phantoms physical matrix doesn’t exist, all that’s left is whack lyrics`
Verbal warfare penetrates ur soul; dis text god jus left u with a holy spirit`
7...gud opener, nice meta but i've seen better from u.
Kid you brought death to your self…I just handed you the knife`
Changed his name, he was big till he found out he was smaller than life `
7...nice line, used the link for proof, gud shit!!
Damn kid lost your last couple of battles, just went on a loosing rally`
Mr. big C you the reason why kids are embarrassed to represent killa kali`
7...funny line, nice personal.
Kid just like the crew your representing you no longer exist`
Living up to your name, this phantom just got lost in the mist`
8...top closer, best personal of ure verse, gud play on his name.

29/40 (72%)



when it all plays out, the true Master had got this battle on Lock...
dude writes "creative" punches away from home, to think "outside the box"...
8...funny fuckin opener, i liked it.
really in the end you battlin me is truly a lost cause...
put ur verse up to a mirror so you can reflect on ya loss...
5...blah! weak man! and the rhymin was fucked up a bit.
imma have you singin sad songs, like you the bitch from the color purple...
if you run everything "around" me, why you aint in the winners "circle"?...
7...nice drop, gud wordplay.
if you're smart nigga, realize ur name actually has a "y" at the end...
be smart now, look at how wack your verse is, AND DONT PUSH "SEND"!...
6...nice line but the mispelt name line on creativitie is played.
another smart move is to act like you never called out my intelligence...
or it will be a chinese meat shop, when we merk you "delicates"...(deli-cats)
7...tight closer, gud wordplay again.

33/50 66%

VOTE:
creativitie

Acuity 09-28-04 03:25 PM

Voted For: Phantom

VOte: phantom

Lyrics: tied
Multies: neither really got em going
Wordplay: tied
OPening:phantom
Ending: dj
Personals: phantom
punches: phantom
Structure: dj
Flow: dj
Originality: phantom

Overall: decent battle DJ --6/10
phantom----7.5/10

PeACE. RETURN THA FAVOUR COS I ALWAYS DO

Raphael 09-29-04 12:51 PM

Voted For: creaTivitie

i only give feedback on the better verse....

Phantoms physical matrix doesn’t exist, all that’s left is whack lyrics`
Verbal warfare penetrates ur soul; dis text god jus left u with a holy spirit`
^^^^^^^^^^^7/10 was aight opener
Kid you brought death to your self…I just handed you the knife`
Changed his name, he was big till he found out he was smaller than life `
^^^^^^^^^^^^^8/10 hot..
Damn kid lost your last couple of battles, just went on a loosing rally`
Mr. big C you the reason why kids are embarrassed to represent killa kali`
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^7/10 brought kali in here...any goog personal
Kid just like the crew your representing you no longer exist`
Living up to your name, this phantom just got lost in the mist`
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^8/10 good closer

i just think that em sce's verse was hitting more that phantoms...no hate..
nuff said..


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