Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

hmmmm ....

punches: tie
personals: shotta
mettas- shotta
multies - not any... or not good enuff to count
vocab - none
wordplay - jay-z

vote shottaboy

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Voted For: Jay-Z

Opener - Create, Shotta's wasnt a punch
Closer - Create, harder than shottas
Punches - Creata, Overall hit harder
Personals - Neither had good ones
Metas - Create, more creative
Multies - Create, for actually havin a few
Structure - Create, shotta had the mixed up line formating
Vocab - Neither were tech at all
Wordplay - Create, christmas wrap line is kinda played but still dope to me
Flow - Shotta, had better flow than Create

Overall you both came out rather weak but Create came to win with some hard, creative punches and neat structuring.
Shotta, Elevate structure, punches and use more personals and multies. Props to both, no hate, just an honest vote in my opinion...peace...

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Voted For: Jay-Z

ROFL creative got this one..........

this one wasnt very good but heres the break down

shotta: 5.5/10
creative 6.5/10

shotta u needa elevate cuzz... ur shit is just PLAIN AND SIMPLE.. NO wordplay or anything


creative:
u needa elevate too.. only reason u won this shit is because u had a good opener and closer.. the rest was just wack

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Voted For: Jay-Z

ok creative definitely won here. he jus had better punches overall. every line he attacked shottaboy even if it wasnt a hrd hit he still hit him good enough to get my vote. no beef but the only ok punch shottaboy had was the one about jay z and it was still weak. i vote for creative.

Voted For: Jay-Z

creative definitely has this one won, shottaboy you weak

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Yes shotta is weak

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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

sHoTTaBoY
Punches were hard & they landed...
Structure was pretty decent...
Flow was pretty good...
Vocab was good too...and easy to read it...

Jay-Z
Punches were good too not as hard tho…
Structure was good..
Flow was decent and tha...
Vocab was pretty decent...

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