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Voted For: $LXDiesel
Punches, personals, pretty strong metas...good verse overall homie.. Structure was on point to with the flo, props to the other homie as well.. Diesel return the favor..: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=152056 |
hahaha ok buddy, you people on this site are pretty good at sucking each others dicks eh?...you guys dont even know what rap is...its sickening
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Voted For: $LXDiesel
gotta go wit Diezel on this battle he seem to came hard with tha punches tha vocab was nice good structure cuzz nice punchlines expecialy that furst line and second that was a good line mayn Eclipz close battle mayn really close but uh i gotta give this up for Diezel cuzz his flow was harder and hist structure and vocab was neat |
This was feedback posted for $LXDiesel
not gonna vote cause not sure if you still in my crew
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Voted For: emind aka eclipz
not really a great battle here... (far from it)... but yeah... LX let me down.... he did so much better when he battled me when I first joined the site... the lines here were all simple-minded... no complexity... no punches or personals... wordplay was also lacking here... no multies... this really looked like a beginner's verse... hopefully this was just a bad day for you... Emind... not that much better butya shyt was held together a little bit tighter. ALL of ya lines rhymed (see LX's closer)... a lot of wack concepts here... structure was stretched all to hell but it didn't hurt you as much being that LX never really hit you with anything... minimal wordplay... an ok attempt at multies... work on getting ya thoughts together and connecting ya punches... i really got bored reading this battle... there were no outstanding lines between the 2 verses... just my opinion... RTF and vote on my battles... thx in advance |
slx ran out of lines from my verses on soundclick and musicgroove....tahts what he used when he battled you the first time I've beaten him many times before...and I will battle him again after and destroy him like I should have in this one
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Voted For: $LXDiesel
e mind had better metas in this one, but the structure goes to LX and the punches, vocab was neither cuz altho, u used sum challenge words for most people LX, it kinda messed up ur flow.. emind's flow was kinda messed up cuz ur structure was stretched at sum points, both did a nice job, very close but i'ma have to say LX, work on ya closer- it should be a mouth-dropper... aight good luck with this and peep my open micz and other works.. aight ~uno~ |
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