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^^were you the one sayin u were gunna murk errbody and there were no vets on this site and shit????
L.I. I Need HELLLLP!!!!!!!! Hook Me Up Playa....What Do I DO? |
hmmm, kinda, nah, I just said that I had I different opinion about what vets are, and that I didnt think a lot of peeps here were vets, but I nevr said I was gonna merk everybody, just that Forsaken and G: Deuce were the first mc's on my list that I wanted to battle anyways, L.I gat at this plz
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ok I just fixed it the best I could, original verse in the sig link, this one I fixed, L.I., can you fix it more??? show me what I coulda done better
I feel bad merkin you after L.I. just fucked yo ass up/ Way you get beat, it's like you 'wear to much makeup'/ Didnt see this merkin comin, like I murdered you in stealth/ I dont like insultin you but 'For$aken' you do it to yourself/ You can ask you crew for 'salvation', but there laughing to/ And I'd say pray to 'god', but he has already 'Forsaken' you/ Tryin to battle an mc like myself, why'd you even bother/ Battle is lookin like starwars 'For$aken I am your father'/ My rhymes like hot sauce, leave you scared and 'shakin'/ Yo physcick, saw ahead a time an named yoself For$aken/ |
If you post that shit again, Ill hop on a plane to Canada to smack the shit outta you.
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Exclusive ill giv e you feed on that this afternoon...same with you philosopher...i have a cross country meet...but dont worry....ill help u guys out
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Well its really just a statement...go at them full force...make up a metaphore...get creative with it... |
wrod....want me to hlep these cats elevate???
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I feel bad merkin you after L.I. just fucked yo ass up/ Way you get beat, it's like you 'wear to much makeup'/ Nah..links are worn out now a days...dont use em...dont use 'these' things around ur punches...the meta is weak... Didnt see this merkin comin, like I murdered you in stealth/ I dont like insultin you but 'For$aken' you do it to yourself/ Meh...its just not a punch..ur just stating... You can ask you crew for 'salvation', but there laughing to/ And I'd say pray to 'god', but he has already 'Forsaken' you/ Decent...made me smile...this was the best bar so far...sorta witty...good bar... Tryin to battle an mc like myself, why'd you even bother/ Battle is lookin like starwars 'For$aken I am your father'/ Noooooo...never again...horrible...if u think about it...it doesnt even classify as a punch... My rhymes like hot sauce, leave you scared and 'shakin'/ Yo physcick, saw ahead a time an named yoself For$aken/ Nah...just not working...already tried so many personals with his name... You really forcused on his name alot...which isnt good...go at him from all aspects...onlky had one good bar in there...but thats sumtin to work off....keep elevating |
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i think i got it handled so far... |
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word thats hwy hes lost poets...leader |
word up...:)
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Well thanks, but I didnt know if you understood it all, so I explained some of the lines, gimme some feedback, and if you did just understand, then say, "I new that already" and that"ll be enough thnx ~1~ |
I understood it...dont worry...just think of creative metas and ull elevate...
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