Uppin Puhhhlllleeeeease

Voted For: ProVerse

Pretty weak battle.....but proverse just takes it, neither really had any quality punches but ur structure and flow took this for ya, contagious i wasn't feelin ya structure at all it ruined ya flow in places....so im givin it to pro...

peace

v/pro

can you hit up this battle wiv an honest vote...thanx
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=152023

uppin for some

critisism on my
rap comparisin
competition

please

This was feedback posted for ProVerse
 

Nice Drop.... Just Checkin How Use Goin... Good Luck To The Both Of U

Voted For: ProVerse

lol this was a funny battle one the other side of proverse he had like to mayny lines haha just makes me laugh out loud:laugh: heres what ima say:

Proverse:
k clearly he KOed you lol he had a lil vocab and he had some wordplay and a lil better punches cleary played proverse worked this guy he also was startin on stucutre kinda and he flowed

ContagiousVenomz:
k you have a real mixed verse try and work on all yer shit elvation elavation elavation also i still need it but not as much as you do im almost a vet haha im 14 to haha but anyway ya you cleary got worked by stucture and every thing i said on proverses part, and the only thing you had was chilish wordplay:laugh:

VOTE: ProVerse

return the favour in my battle verses mike hawk try to explain it to like i did:D peace
~1~

uppin for some votes pleeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssseeeeee

uppin for some votes
please

I will return the favor IMMEDIATLEY

please

uppin for some votes PUHLEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSEEE

Voted For: ContagiousVenomz

WHOOOOA!!!! Nice shit hmmm Bla yer shit whack and self applauded don't jock yaself let us (tha voters do that 4 u).
C had more punchlines better punchlines a better structure and way more creative lines as well Bla i took yer critism and so now i'm uppin my skillz u need to take ya own advice kuz u got raped kuz

Voted For: ProVerse

punches-bla
stukture-bla
pers-bla
best-bla
b.l.a wins
plz return the fav on battlin in da sig
pz