Voted For: N.E.T

damn...not bad at all...lines i liked...

You couldn’t beat me if I give you cheats or even a walk through
I’ll put a bullet in your throat, so your Adams apple has someone to talk to

that was clever

You’ll look back at this and say it was an historical session
Is he whack? Don’t answer, that’s a rhetorical question

that was ok..firs line was kind of wack....but the 2nd line made up for it..

I aim at your temple for the immediate takedown
You’re an enzyme, when I raise the heat, you begin to breakdown

that was also fairly clever...pretty decent verse..needs work..but those lines won it over


exclusive...your gettin better and better..but this dude just out foxxed you...once you start understanding how to be complex/clever with jokes...you will be a force...

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Exclusive i thought u had better punches and vocab. but the other guy had better flow. but my vote still goes to exclusive.

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exclusive got this...
both pretty decent rhymes..
ex ya flow was right on point tho, ya disses hit hard just like you planned, good job an keep em comin...

n.e.t ya opener an finisher lacked creativity, there important when it comes to battles, but 2wards the middle of ya verse is where u was stronmgest that elastic an sarcastic bar was pretty damn dope, for overrall content in ya verse ex got my vote...
no hate i'm just tellin it how i see it

Voted For: N.E.T

kind of a weak battle i thought both of you coulda came a little harder.

~{ExClusive}~-an ok verse. i expected more out of you. not any real punches. no personals. i didnt really feel like you attacked him. your flow was good and so was your structure but the verse overall wasnt really good.- 5/10

N.E.T- a little better than exclusive but not by much. you kinda had some punches but they didnt hit hard. no personals. your verse coulda been pre written. good flow and strucutre. overall you get a 6/10


N.E.T won cause none of you really had any good punches or personals but N.E.T actually attempted to drop some. like this line:
You’ll look back at this and say it was an historical session
Is he whack? Don’t answer, that’s a rhetorical question

i think that was the best punch out of the whole battle. not really anything good about any of the verses

overall vote-N.E.T


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vote goes to exclusive, another battle you gonna win, had some better wordplay and his vocab was alot wider than nets
both had a decent flow, structure goes to xclusive and punches goes to exclusive too.

keep up the good work