i say no to X-Spitty you got horrible stucture. i suggest changing it to so thing like this
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or
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enter after everyline and but something there like dots or slashes

get another flow and come back basicly elevate

aight this is an easy one on both of em... no and no... both have wack structure... but phenom has potential... x-spitty is just wack... not to be mean but its the truth... sorry but no to both

i totally agree great leadership, i finally got a crew that got good leadership

tru dat 2 both of yall...claps for bigpapa....UPPIN DA TRYOUTS FOR DA SICKEST CREW IN DIS SHIT.......

ayo thanks guys... i apriciate that shit... uppin this shit for some tryouts yall!

uppin for tryouts peeps, we looking hot as a muthafucka, lol

yo free a's dont sleep on dis thread...we da fam...hookin up wit dis crew gives u protection from da rest of da niggaz on dis site..c'mon check out my sig for da roster...

uppin for tryouts.

uppin for tryouts...........................

gunz&drugz
gunz kill ppl so do i
hu gives a fuck if dey die
drug r da best thing out these days ppl take dem though lifes
also cuttin dicks heads with knifes
man its just life u live or u dont
fuck all the wankers hu wanna do suicide but wont

theres my try out

in/out?

fuck no....you out..but i dont get da final say big does...but damn dog...that gun drug shit is played to da fullest..your shit was whack anyways

well fuck u den
pz

i agree with teck.... not no but HELL FUCKIN NO.... very played, bad structure... elevate big time... no hate tho... lol

yo can i be in this heres a tryout a battle i did aginst X-On

nickel you aint worth that much//
if u like his shit u smoked too much dutch//
his mama the only women he touched//
not saying he ugly but he sleep in a cage//
like an aminal this bitch got me in a rage//
u dont like violance talk//
well u gonna hate when i spit through my double gauge//
thats not yours//
thats a mobb deep phrase//
stop stealing verses and lines//
before i shoot u up multiple times//
and if ya ask him his jail record//
he say he been to jail 9 times//
but in all reality he commited 0 crimes//
if you sold your rhymes u'd get cash back//
shut up before i finish this and put u back on the rack//
even with a olypic champion he couldnt run on a track//
flows, punches, brains just some of the shit your stuff lack//
i won this battle and it aint a question its a fact//


and hese a battle i did aginst CeRtIfIeDtHuG

man fuck checkin in unless you wanna get ripped..
nodoby wanna see you, like a fat bitch gettin stripped..
just one slip of my tounge and ya throat is slit..
closest you get to a single is doin a skit..
call me a firespitta cause i come from hell..
no i aint a drug deala but im givin you this L..
pop ya ass faster than a bag of popcorn..
your useless.. like a roof with the top torn..
come here little homie, yea leave ya closet..
my gun will leave you drippin like a leaky faucet..
i put some sauce on it and stick a fork in ya yous done..
your punches have me laughin, leave me slappin my knee..
one jab from me? shit you gon' need the EMT..
call you a bird feeder cause i leave you hangin in a tree..

hit me up in a pm or in this thread bouth on your discition