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Voted For: Ice Pick
- Both had really stretched lines- just one used a tiny font-... Ice Pick had better punches... Ur punches will never burn a livin flesh..they just ICED b4 u thro ‘em in ya spit So,im astonished how u PICK me thinking 2 rip,when I just knocked u out like in ya sig best bar from yvonne... wasn't great- the setup was weak... personal wasn't very clever, even the bold ICE and PICK were basic additions to the verse... Ice Pick- I liked a few of your lines... you show more potential in your verse... just work on line length-- and when you rhymed So with Ho... needs to stop-- need more of a complex rhymin structure to go with your vocab and description... keep workin on ur punches cuz they aint 100% yet, but in the right direction... |
Voted For: Ice Pick
ice pick won this battle because his punches hit harder n were more creative even tho they were stretched "longer than giraffe necks" (lloyd banks). But Yvonne spit was pretty basic even tho it flowed better it didnt really hit that hard cuz the personals were pretty played too. |
get back at me wit an honest vote
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Uppn for one more vote yo
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Voted For: Ice Pick
...One-Sided Vote... Ice Pick gets my vote on this one cause... 1.His punches were hard & that they connected. 2.Tha flow on his piece was aight 3.Tha structure was 'ok' (a little stretchy tho) Yvonne..yo shit was pretty good too... 1.Yo punches weren't as hard as Ice Pick's tho 2.Structure was decent (better than Ice Pick's) :D 3.And your flow was ok... Overall... Ice Pick came harder in the punches tho..*that's all that matters* ..Peace |
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