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Voted For: Verbal Phenom

Verbal Phenom: good opener with a nice personal it could have rhymed though, good punches, ok meta's, good structure which made it flow good, good personals, no multi's, ok closer, closer could have been better. overall 7/10



Assasin: nice opener, good punches, ok meta's, ok structure, ok flow, a few multi's, not really any personals, nice closer. overall 6.5/10


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Voted For: Verbal Phenom

Verbal - good spit man, a good solid flow.. and punches were hitten hard.

Best Line - Battle Is Only One Round Like Writers Block Yall Never Make Round 2**
Respect Is Out Of The Question... Asking Newbs To Join Ya Crew?!?

Worst Line - Kid Ya Can't Battle With The King of Verbs, Losing Isn't An Option
Alias Demonstrates Ya Lyrics Must Suck Being Named Afta A Condom*

Assasin -good spit man, you had some good wordplay and punches.

Best Line - verbal phenom spits rhymes more played thn lines from shakespeare scripts...
you could write ya whole verse in braille and we still wouldnt feel it...
its only right tht i acknowledge ya for tryin,we cant all have dope skillz when we write...
u could compress ya whack lines together and they still wouldnt be tight...
(great finish)

Worst Line - ill leave ya lookin like a smurf..blue in the face..stuck for words while ya choke...
gettin ya ass smoked by me is the only way u'll know wot its like to be dope...

OVERALL - very good battle, here.. was really close but I gotta give this to verbal, I was just feelin his verse more and his flowed together alot better. Both had good punches and wordplay in there, good battle boys!

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