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High-Dro 11-04-04 12:01 AM

Voted For: Young Philly

yo, i thought Gkillaz had some good wordplay..i liked
"Silly fagot dicks are for chicks...
Leave ya head red like koolaid mix..."

I thought Young Philly was pretty dope, thought ur disses were nice

overall i like young philly's more cuz i wasn't feelin Gkillaz's actions between rhymes shit...jus cuz in a real battle in person u wouldn't do shit like that

My Vote goes to Young Philly

Young Philly 11-05-04 12:48 PM

thanks man i'll return tha fav...uppin....................................... ........................

Young Philly 11-18-04 02:32 PM

Uppin............................................. ......................................

Young Philly 11-30-04 01:20 PM

ok................................................ .................................................. ........

jr freeze 11-30-04 01:31 PM

Voted For: Young Philly

V/young philly............u came wit better punchs an multi's u had better vocab an creativity u had a good opener.....
Gkillaz....u also came out wit a good opener but u lacked vocab an u were up an down wit tha punchs in this battle not constint...but good battle to both of you
V/young philly
*RETURN THE FAVOR*

GKillaz05 11-30-04 02:49 PM

This was feedback posted for Young Philly
 
...uppin.......................................... ...........

Sik Wit It 12-04-04 06:25 PM

Voted For: GKillaz


GK
nice punches..landed & was on point
structure was good...everything lined up
vocab was nice...flow was good..and the
persona's was good too...overall u had a
nice drop...
7/10

Y.P.
decent punches....
structure was okay..[get rid of the //'s]
flow was okay w/ tha structure
decent vocab...didnt see no persona's...
overall u had an okay drop...
4/10

RTF GKillaz
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Zeke 12-04-04 06:54 PM

Voted For: GKillaz

GKillaz:
Let Me Break It Down FOr You The Flow Was Decent...Vocabulary Was Kind Of Basic But Good Nuff......Structure Was Pretty Neat.....Punches Was There Pretty Good Kid.....Personals Hmm It's Aiight Cozz

Philly:
Flow Was Terrible Structure Was Terrible That "/" Shit Is Sloppy Take It Out Punches Was Not Really There Get A New Hobby Hommmie No Hate

I Rated This Battle On Vocab And Structure....

Vote=GKillaz


GKillas Return The Favor
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GKillaz05 12-05-04 02:03 PM

wow, people actually are explaining there shit now, I know I won this battle.. cuz all the votes for me are actually explained and from people who know what the fuck they talkin bout.

anyways, UPPIN...

GKillaz05 12-07-04 01:00 PM

Uppin................. Uppin.................uppin....

Young Philly 12-07-04 02:15 PM

uppin............................................. .................................................. ...................

Young Philly 12-10-04 02:10 PM

uppin this shit.............................................. ...............................

The Eruption 12-11-04 09:58 AM

Voted For: Young Philly

This was an overall good batle but im goin to have to give this one to ..........
I really like the flow to both verses
there was a nice touch to GKILLAZ flow but it still could have been a little better with the wordplay, Nice sructure to both verses, YOUNG PHILLY had some GREAT line too
i really liked his flow but ur metas werent visible but punchlines were sick
nice battle


-Please return the favor on my battle
I know its a lil weak but its ok
Please return the favor
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Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Young Philly 12-11-04 09:45 PM

thanks kid holla at me uppin.....................................

Parallel 12-11-04 11:59 PM

Voted For: GKillaz

Philly:
Me back to the streets is not an odd relation altercation//
Plus i wreck it,Shit gets hecktic once i make an observation//
4/10

Don't care if you white, black, indian or asian//
Annilihate G Bitch Killaz, then i'll rock the nation//
4/10

I don't believe the rumors spread,won't listen to the bitchin//
Prime objective Destroy Bitch Killaz, that'll end the mission//
6/10

I hope it flatters you,you tried to compair me to a bitch//
I boastfully make hits, you mostly just fake shit//
7/10

To tell the honest truth LKD deminished you//
You just got ya boys to vote so RB didn't finish you//
5/10

Super lyrical is my Super power Convolution//
wit lyrics like yours, you failed the M.C. Institution//
4/10

You battle me and actually expecting to win//
Your lyrics speak for themselves and are concidered a sin//
4/10

meh you had alot of played lines with weak punches but i seen a real dope line...

GKillaz:
This kat right here, to me doesnt compared...
Last battle I had him screaming it wasnt fair...
5/10

Beware of the furry I unleash on the microphone...
It causes a cyclone.. ruptures your timezone...
7/10

When you was LilKdogg you left my rhyme alone...
Now your unknown get away from my throne...
9/10

Got ya runnin from your home movin to Mexico...
But even there you couldnt get your text to flow...
6/10

Last battle I won 5 to 1 this times goin be K-O...
You want to battle me at my best?.. ok if you say so...
4/10

I break knecks.. your tryna flow wit fake text...
Fuckin pussy's tryin to come at me wit latex...
5/10
How much did you pay for them two wins?...
Pick up the microphone thats when the boo begins...
5/10
Why the fuck am I wasting time on this guys ass..
He's just a ghost tryna come back from the past...
6/10

have a nice sleep 6ft deep REST IN PIECES...
Watch as his win rate rapidly decreases...
6/10

BANG BANG MURDERIN YOU AINT A THANG
JUS PIcK UP THA MIC AND WATCH YOUR BRAINS HANG
3/10

meh lots of played line but it worked out..


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