yo VP that was the nicest that ie eer seen from you man had good wordplay and all that it is a ery nice drop i liked it alot good job.

PS. i might be in lawson next week. who knows i might see you. holla holla

good stuff.very expressive.tho' i disagree with some of ur views it's still good.

Thnx.... upping for feedback.

damn VP, you had pretty good rhyme scheme, but i don't really like the way you put ur structure... jst not use to reading things dat way, but its good to see u doin somethin different... I've never read ur open mics before, but its pretty good so far, but I just kind of got tired of the open mic rite after i started reading it.. jst not the type of open mics i like to read...no offense...jst you know, ppl have their own tastes :) but overall i give you a 7.8/10 good job :)