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B.I.Detained 10-14-04 11:38 PM

Aight..

here's the lil deal..
Peeps not leaving feedbk but I liked your piece.
Not overwhelmed by it bt it was better
than most pieces round here.
& enough peeps on here have mentioned your
name while speaking about topicals.

So..
Your In.
Anyone contests it..
I will hurt them.

Welcome.

-1

In-Vision 10-14-04 11:39 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by B.I.Detained
Your In.
Anyone contests it..
I will hurt them.

Welcome.

-1



lol.....sounds good...sounds real good

Keith Moon 10-14-04 11:42 PM

me......im good...but extrely lazy ;)

B.I.Detained 10-14-04 11:46 PM

BigChase.. I actually do think you could be good just coz of your]
ego but each piece I've read of yours is simply awful. Please prove me
wrong with a piece that your proud of soon.
Coz all Six places are nearly took. & I wont be recruiting for a long time.


Everyone else..

SIG THE WHAT I HAVE IN MY SIG.

-1

schema 10-15-04 09:00 PM

ive got a battle against poet but it was rushed and kinda blah...let me get a topic to write to for a tryout...

B.I.Detained 10-16-04 02:34 PM

Ok I've saw it but you aint left a link.

schema 10-16-04 02:50 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=154343

B.I.Detained 10-16-04 03:09 PM

I was really put off by your choice of wording.
You had good flow and concept but..
Post up your best Om and we'll make a decision

Keith Moon 10-16-04 03:16 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by B.I.Detained
BigChase.. I actually do think you could be good just coz of your]
ego but each piece I've read of yours is simply awful. Please prove me
wrong with a piece that your proud of soon.
Coz all Six places are nearly took. & I wont be recruiting for a long time.



well all my dope drops in topical and poerty league have been deleted.....

schema 10-16-04 03:17 PM

i dont have one yet...i like JUST started topical...that was my first one...give me a topic and ill make an om and post the link in here

B.I.Detained 10-16-04 03:28 PM

BigChase well tht sucks.. try and dig them up if you can.

Schema..

Topic- Does Beheading Equal Justice?

Come dope

Keith Moon 10-16-04 04:04 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by B.I.Detained
BigChase well tht sucks.. try and dig them up if you can.

Schema..

Topic- Does Beheading Equal Justice?

Come dope



I cant :(

they deleted the forums cuz the mods became inactive or delted the threads

:(

well I used to be better when I had motivation but it disappeared....sometimes I sacrifice flow for story like in my battle w/ R-Rated

L.I. 10-16-04 04:15 PM

I could be in it...I'm top 5...word

atti? 10-16-04 04:17 PM

That Should Be Pretty Tite...
I Did The Same Thing Alittle While Back...
My Crew Was...

Gene.ius
...Abstrakt...
...Shadow...
...Artafakt Wordz...
...Flow Intelligent...
...Fluidmoon...
...R Rated...
...MoTiF...
...Forgotten Flow...
...Lethal Lunatic...

Blaaaaaaaah...
Can't Remember Everyone...
Shit Was Pretty Crazy...
Only Problem Is That You'll See Its Easy To Get Most Of The Hott Topical Heads...
But Then You'll Eventually Have All Of Them...
And Then There's No Competition...
And Shit Feels Kinda Pointless...
But Goodluck With What You've Got Going Down...
.One.

B.I.Detained 10-17-04 06:46 AM

Cool,

BigChase..
I'm not too arsed about flow is its a whole package I look at.
Story is probably most important to me.


LI.. proof?

lol.


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