This was feedback posted for Soul Sickness
 

gotta check somethin really quick

this was a close battle though

uppin.....one more....................................

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Voted For: ..kontroverzey..

cant even get the rules right truly are a fukin herb/
like randy johnson i bring heat at u but still throw a curve/
^^^pathetic intro, 1/10
u like my bitch cuz ima fuk u for every word u worth/
i roll in style dis kid gets transported ina hearst/
^^^^^mmm better, 3/10
maybe i day u will learn how to get it right/
so like jesus ima move dis herb into the light/
^^^^na, ddnt like it, you need personals, 1/10
u play wit milk bags and run around sayin u grabed tity/
rock da g-unit sneaker but kid u not like fity/
^^^^dry, 1/10
whether or not u belong theres some kon-tra-verzey/
bring ya best kid but still u not-gunna-hurt me/
bad ending, 2/10

total = 8


Dayum. The Toronto Raptors have a better win percentage then you..
Kids gay, Imma take ya soul, like thiefs robbin elton John's shoe..
^^^^^dont really understand this but i get the pont, 4/10
Please, ur obsession with 5 yr old girls is your only form of sickness..
It takes balls to write ill rhymes, This Bitch is Dickless..
hahahahahhaha^^^^NICE!! 7/10
Splatter your brains, Bitches think im Ms.cleo, way im readin ya mind..
Here,
Weak Textcee who constantly gets merked in Battles
......................... ^there's "soul Sickness" defined..
^^^^nice, 5/10
Put so many holes in your body Osama might hide in you next..
After merkin you, you might recieve a penny,
..........................imma be countin Endless cheques..
^^^^lol, 6/10
just die now, cause your life is worth no more then a foodstamp..
Your wish of becoming successfull will never come true,
......................even if you had a magic lamp..
^^^^ok finsih, 5/10

total, 33, nice verse you win this man!!


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