Voted For: streetryda

alright....being as how it says 6 lines..you SHOULD BE DQ'D....but i won't vote against you due to the rules..i will however..average out the score i give each bar.....so you better hope your consistent if you wanna win..

you call yourself bkbrawla dont be sad when i maul~ya
left your mouth dropped cuz i dropped it hot, just stalled~ya

not bad for an opener...i give it a 7/10


ripped out your vocal cords, deceased, now lets hear you speak
the only time you beat a man is when you got them under the sheets

gay jokes are kinda played....but this was funny so i'll give it a 8/10

sig'ed this bullet so they know who left you lying dead
papers out, caption bolded, [B]heartless murder[B/] is all they read

good closer, i liked it a lot 8/10

over all score 23/30
average score = 7.666

street u been defeated u aint spittin nothin cause i poured acid down yo throat i cracked ya speech puttin hot punches through yo ribcage no-one going to hear yo screech//(mournful cry)
you might spittin hot ish when i spit throwin cold hollow points punches rippin through yo torso
i keep throwin dese full blows ur going to win? iam going to lose? naw playa its been verso//

horrible attempt at multis..and the lines were way to stretched........2/10


I'll smack ya bitch ass like my hippo but in an pimp way bitch u'll treat me with respect i'll have yo ass go to da fuckin store buy me an bouquet//
Iam like an clay when i spit fire i always come hard iam crazy mental my punches just dont pinch ya skin i'll go deep ur gettin scarred//

doesn't even rhyme........0/10

He thinks he'z an thug he rides on tha streets but da last time u was ridin on streets is when you playin hop-scotch on seasme streets// (o yes dey did an live show in maryland)
I'll discrete you body so u can have 2 personalities i got some tricks under my sleeve more surprsing when yo mom saw you jerkin yo meat now this battle is ova yo ass wouldnt be hotter dan mines if you was in an hot-seat//

you said streets 3 times in one line...but atleast you attempted a personal...4/10

overall score = 6/30
average score = 2/10



street ryda wins by a fuckin landslide...you need madd elevate brawla

This was feedback posted for BkBrawla
 

*ahem* Someone Got Merked................................word

lol....haha you a funny guy drastic.........or should i say ________ lol i wont....haha upinnn on this vote explained too which is even better!!!!!! peace~1

Voted For: streetryda

StreetRyda- What can I say besides you killed him... punches were hott espcially the under the sheets line, pretty hott way you spit the verse..

BkBrawla- No hate but that was just like a bunch of jumbled words... i'll be suprised if anybody understands that, punches BARELY hit.. Elevate...

Basically a one-sided battle..

uppin lets get some votes coming..........

Voted For: streetryda

i voted for strret cause BK barely rhymed his structre was way off it was hoorible bad wordplay
streets puches hit but not harhis wordplay was a lil off
along with structre aight rhyming bad battle though return the favor

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Voted For: BkBrawla

streetryda:
hmm good stucture and it flowed but that was weak dawg...weak punches and wordplay...try working on that shit...and you'll be dope vocabulary you were pretty weak with that but o well elevate in time...

BKBrawler:
dayum bad stucture but it flowed good vocabulary...dope ass punches liek dayum where that coem from naw jk...good wordplay at some spots...nice verse is all i gotta say...keep workin that shit but try fix your stucuture...

sry for my spelling im tierd:)

return the favour here:
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Voted For: BkBrawla

since when is that 6 lines^^^JESUS!........................

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my bad...that was feedback...dq dat shit..........

will do man.......i know it happens..ive done it before a couple times.........but uppin on this shit......wish you woulda voted for real instead of leavin feedback tho.......
but w/e
UPPIN ON THIS LETS GET IT CLOSE ALREADY!!!!!!
peace~1

uppin man damn i want this shit closed already........vote right and explain em damn

upppin ppl damn stop sleepin on this and vote already
peace~1

Voted For: streetryda

Damn..... BKB..... you werent that good..... some of ya lines were hell;a streched.... and some of your lines didnt have any good flow at all.... you had a few good punches in threre...... and your structure was terible.....

Syreet.... you were pretty.... good... you had some treched likes..... nice flow and some good punches..... so my vote goes to you.....

PLease return tha fava in the Sig\/ \/ \/ THANX~!

up up up lets get some more votes comin peeps.........graci
peace~1

uppin god dammit lets get some votes goin on this thing so it can get closed!!!!!