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hmmm okay. damn no onez votin on my battlez.
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i JUST NEED 1 MORE VOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
please vote the battle in my sig. the favor WILL b returned:):D |
uppin try outs uppin try outs uppin try outs
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Yo this is the verse i posted fo' my battle against LyricleSolja......Just a quick keystyle....
My Lyrics Descending, Renderin' You Defensless..... Pressure mountin on ya Cranium-Ya mind gettin Restless..... Foolin ya Lyrical Devices wit Stealth and Camoflauge....... Hazardous to Herbs Health-Hittin ya wit Lyrical Volleys n' a Barrage..... I Collide wit ya Rhymes but mine Dominate... Create a Body count at a Phenominal Rate..... LyricleSolja Minds been Fractured and Shattered nuttin left to Obliterate.... Cast this Fool into Eternal Rest This Herbs Just Sealed his own Fate..... Ya rhymes are timed-bad just like Premature Ejaculation...... The onli time ya get "Hot" is from the friction on ya hand of u Masterbatin..... |
dman that's fuck up dude
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Scrape out^.......
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heres one from me I.Mind i'm doin good right?
you suck you fuckin dog and i'll throw you in a pitt/ bring you down and spit in ur face and say you aint shit/ you cant battle for shit cuz bitch you aint fitt/ you wont spit because you too afraid to get hit/ you aint got no ballz to battle me you shook/ you kno you suck so why you call out Snook / come against me fo sho bitch you'll get cooked/ when you yell your so unknown no one will look/ your another loser in my hand book/ dawg get outta here kick in the ass with my foot/ you aint shit but a mutha fuckin pussy/ you still suck and you still a duck suckin rookie/ your skillz will never fuckin grow/ i'll give you aa lost bitch you kno/ llok i drooped you didnt bitch i'm done with this hoe/ |
lol. mines BETTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i been practicing multi's 4 a new song im writing... here's a sneak: "cause of my criminal thoughts, many young lives r wrought/ a few hits of marijuana and another kid ends up shot/ an innocent life lost, government looks at us cross/ blaimin it on the music and we pay the cost" AND "they say all my music is just disrespectin/ and yet im creating millions of hits per second/ they disapprove my opinion cause im an adolecent/ but if u listen closly, i really teach a lesson" AND FINALLY "dont go minglin in2 places when no1 wants u/ or else all our industry gon burn like hot glue/ im aimin this all at the Bush administration/ media's interrigation/ this whole fucking generation" . . . the last was kinda weak, but tell me wut u think. its political, so.. |
i think ur rhymes are too simple.
try to make summin better than this. this is tupacz rhyme and try to rhyme like this. I was born a rebel makin trouble for the devil takin this gang bangin ish to a whole nother level. damn he is so ill. |
"you suck you fuckin dog and i'll throw you in a pitt/"
I'M basic? |
i can make a rhyme like that.
my head steamz like a kettle to where i can never settle i hit the fastest with a fist as hard as metal. how do you like it. |
yo mercenary, your the potential co-leader ight??jst start gettin wins lol
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aight man i will but no one votes. coo i'm the co-leader.
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u think his shit better than my verse (other page)?!?!?
i aint jealous or nuttin, just curious how u figured THAT 1??? |
Yo I.Mind is there gonna be any Ill ppl here..and am i in...coz i could be Co-Leader...
Mercenary dont say nuttin coz Fuck u im Better than u........ |
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