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Magic5 11-15-04 08:58 PM

This was feedback posted for :.anxiety.:
 
If i did not just read the most played lines then played needs a new definition..

Seriously..

anxiety 11-15-04 09:00 PM

The Liquor line was the only line i worked on... I don't know why... Maybe because im whack at text battling... And you know what... I don't give a fuck...

But the Liquor line owned his whole verse, just so you know...

Abraxas 11-15-04 09:15 PM

so.. you want this polling to keep going or you wanna take the loss and i take the win... liek you siad.. if we dont get any moer votes??

Implicit 11-15-04 11:50 PM

Voted For: Paramik

Paramik - ur verse was kinda good..your opener was creative but not really that good..you attacked his crew which is good and that second bar was funny..the only thing i didnt like about ur verse was ur closer...

fav. line - CS is always Coming With Shit, but fuck ya crap aint the last…..
Cause the only things that’s shit loaded…, is coming from ya ass.

overall - 8/10




anxiety - honestly i dont know what the big hype is about you..everyone says ur really good..this verse wasnt too great..you had a clever opener using the personal..your second bar i understood but it wasnt really good..the priest line was lame..i liked the wordplay with the liquior..but ur closer was kinda wack...

fav. line - On this site, ain’t no one whacker than Paramik…
He couldn’t blow his shit up if he was an Arabic…

overall - 7/10


vote - Paramik


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