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uppin this shit for some honest votes.....................
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Voted For: Kwell
v/ Kwell First offs, both of your ryhmes were nice...honestly though, not like you two usually do. BREAK DOWN: Kwell STRUCTURE-WEAK RYHMES-STRONG VOCAB-WEAK PUNCHLINE-STRONG CREATIVITY-AVERAGE Out of 5 stars recieved 3 and half (x) CeEd STRUCTURE-Average RYHMES-Strong VOCAB-TOO STRONG(SOME WORDS PPL DONT KNOW) PUNCHLINE-WEAK, not one that stands out in my head CREATIVITY-AVERAGE v/Kwell |
vote appreciated..........uppin for some more........
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Voted For: Kwell
(x) Ced bad structure = bad flow.. you had a lot of noob lines and played punches... didn't have much of a rhyme structure either and nothing was well worded or put together, overall you could of done a lot better.. or maybe not? keep it up. Kwell saw some ok/decent lines.. sum played, like the bird concept and some other one, but you did not have to come that hard to win... its obvious you did as good as what was needed.. making it clear you won. Vote: Kwe;; |
Return the favor please.
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uppin for some more votes....
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uppin this shit.....drop some honest votes........
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uppin...................
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uppin this shit....drop a link and i'ma hit that up wit an honest vote...
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yo peeps cmon good honest votes here keep it up
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uppin this shit again....
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uppin this shit...
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^lmao...anyways uppin this shit...drop some votes...
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aight uppin this shit again...i'll return the favor...
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