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uppin this.....
I wanna see Eastcoast ended on this battle. Little dodgy fucker! |
Voted For: JPoll
Eastcoast Egotistically you can't beat me, cuz I never miss aim/ Statistically the king of this game, and I'm here to reclaim/ /\ Blah self-glory The ballistical championship, leaving Jpoll with no votes/ And a sedistical slit throat, using a verse that he already wrote/ /\ weak self-g and played Your not rhythmical, you can't win, I'm on a higher level/ It's mystical, your six feet beneath, and i'm the one with the shovel/ /\ punch meh...again self-g Probably mythically aged, and yet you aint even hit puberty/ Ritually waiting till u get married cuz "I have to keep my purity"/ /\ aight line but not special That's what J says, yet he keeps a spare bottle beside the bed/ Only a fag jacksoff with thoughts of a man inside his head/ /\ ??? blah at the closer JPoll Another hurb child, kids claiming to be a whole coast... Too bad I'm like Rocky, punching his frozen raw roast... /\ 2nd line self-g but aight opener And its true and it's on, even with a quick key, You can't think you'll win... ......................cause not even your family believes /\ blah at 3 line rhymes but good punch You'll get owned, if you go toe to toe with the champ... I mean fuck as his desktop he's ink... .....................ready to be hit with the NOBODY stamp... /\ good punch liked it You got cramps yet, cause your meager streak is done... This kids as stupid as nelly claiming to be number one.. /\ aight punch again No I'm the king, I've had belts and I'll show you my ring.. You with my win is as unlikely, ...........as you and Marilyn Monroe having an all night fling /\ aight closer coulda been better though V/JPoll...1st off explaining isn't nesseccary...but i will Eastcoast how much more self-g could ya get???...ur supposed to be dissin ya opponent strucutre was stretched and flow off in places also lose the / thing it's newb...punches non-existent and personals none...no real wordplay basic vocab...elevate JPoll...much better verse 1 sided to be honest u took this with ease and you shoulda took the time to battle someone with more skill to be honest...this to me looks like a newb bashing but blah flowed aight but try and lose the 3 line rhymes because it to me jus hides a stretched structure... RTF on ma sig or on my latest song... |
This was feedback posted for EastCoast
This nigga took this . .
I Felt his punches more... He was Consistant. |
^haha, posting up comments for yourself again? uppin for the ko
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y didnt u vote than...k9...instead of just posting feedback.....WTF??!!......
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upping............................................
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Voted For: JPoll
*yawn* i wanted a close battle punches- Jpoll overall just harder hittin personals- neither had em multis- neither had em metas- Jpoll overall just better structure- Jpoll wuz better lookin, and didnt fall off wordplay- neither had it humor- Jpoll i chuckled flow-Jpoll overall just kept goin Jpoll solid drop. try some personals too. EC bro u gotta elevate. harder punches, try personals, and incorporate multis, wordplay, etc too No Hate Just An Honest Voter v/Jpoll pz Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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you a hypocrit muthafucker...how you gon say dat when on the first and second page you voted for me.......dick riding..hating...BITCH........................uppi n dis battle. |
I thought you won it you little shit, but that was my opinion, which aint always that good anyway. Plus i still wanna see you go down in this battle like you will in ours.
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^wutever....................uppin dis.............
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This was feedback posted for EastCoast
checkin polls............................................
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This was feedback posted for EastCoast
i like the last part the most good verse and made it simple
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y is ya'll just posting feedback if ya think i won then vote.......damn!
uppin/// |
Voted For: EastCoast
east coast got this easily jpoll you self gloriefied to much and east had a good flow to his rap my favorite line is your six feet beneath, and i'm the one with the shovel/ |
i dont want my vote dqued so here is more feedback of why eastcoast won.
he had a better closer jdot used ...........as you and Marilyn Monroe having an all night fling thats like sayin he gets pussy you dont wana glorify your opponent you wana diss him plus i wasn't feelin the ...................'s in your structure |
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